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RECALL

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RECALL
Written by
Liana Marie Sive
© 2025 Liana Marie Sive
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Pattern Films
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FADE IN:
ACT ONE
1. THE WALL
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- NIGHT
Darkness. A click. A lamp flickers on.
The wall.
A corkboard covers one entire wall of the small trailer. It's not decorated - it's consumed. Newspaper clippings. Government forms. Photographs with faces circled. Permit applications. A map of New Mexico with colored pins marking locations. Red string connecting some pins. Handwritten index cards with numbers, dates, questions.
On a shelf below the board: an old Civil Defense Geiger counter. Yellowed plastic. Dust in the seams. A strip of tape on it reads: ROSA.
At the center of everything: a framed letter. Official government seal. The words CLAIM DENIED visible even from across the room. A case number stamped in red: #1638.
Below the letter, a photograph. A woman in her sixties. The glass is cracked - an old break, never repaired. The crack runs directly through her face.
And below that - something half-visible. Words scratched out. Rewritten. Scratched out again. We can't quite read them.
GIL PADILLA (50s) stands in front of the wall, studying it. He's wearing yesterday's clothes. Coffee cup in hand - cold, forgotten.
He touches the photograph.
GIL
(quiet)
Case 1638.
He turns to the map. Traces a line between two pins with his
finger - then lets it drift, following the base of the mountain range. The baseline. Measures the distance with a worn ruler.
Writes on an index card: 16.38 miles.
Writes on another card: BASELINE = WIND PATH. Pins it beneath the miles.
Pins it to the board.
Steps back. Studies the whole thing.
GIL (CONT'D)
Forty-three people. Let's see.
He picks up a marker. Writes on a fresh card:
1638 ÷ 43 =
He stops. Puts down the marker.
GIL (CONT'D)
Division -
He doesn't finish. Puts the card in his pocket.
A faint tremor. Barely perceptible. A pushpin snaps loose - plink - and an index card slides off.
Gil watches it fall. Picks it up. Re-pins it without expression.
His phone buzzes. He ignores it.
It buzzes again.
He glances at it:
Reminder: Your installation is tomorrow at 10 AM.
He silences the phone.
Looks back at the wall.
GIL (CONT'D)
(to the photograph)
I'm still here, Mom. Still counting.
He turns off the lamp.
Darkness.
But in the darkness, we can still see the faint glow of streetlight through the blinds catching the string on the wall. The pattern. Waiting.
CUT TO:
2. GIL'S TRAILER - PRESENT
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- NIGHT
Gil stands before the wall. The same wall. Five years of additional material.
He's looking at a printout of the news interview. Destiny's face, frozen mid-sentence.
He unpins it. Puts it in a drawer.
Looks at the wall.
GIL
(to himself)
Forty-three votes. Don't talk about the pattern. Just... do the
job.
He picks up a fresh index card. Writes:
RULES
FOR BEING MAYOR: 1. Don't mention 1-6-3-8 2. Don't mention the
podcast 3. Don't mention Mom 4. Be boring 5. Win by being boring
He pins it to the wall.
Stares at it.
GIL
(CONT'D)
Boring.
He doesn't sound convinced.
3. MORNING - THE DRIVE
EXT. NEW MEXICO HIGHWAY --- DAY
Gil's truck on the road. Old Ford. Rust spots. Reliable.
The landscape is huge. Empty. Beautiful in a way that makes humans feel small.
Gil drives with the window down. No radio. Just wind and engine.
On the seat beside him: the binder. Thick. Tabs visible.
On the dashboard: a photograph taped to the sun visor. Rosa Elena Padilla. His mother. The same photo from the wall.
He glances at it.
GIL
Forty-three votes, Mom. Wish me luck.
The photograph doesn't respond.
He drives.
4. AGUAVERDE - ESTABLISHING
EXT. NEW MEXICO HIGHWAY --- DAY
Gil's truck on the road. Old Ford. Rust spots.
The landscape opens up. High desert. Yucca and chamisa. Rolling terrain stretching toward mountains - the Manzanos, blue-gray in the distance.
Wind. Always wind. Dust devils spin across empty fields.
It comes down off the Manzanos and rides the baseline like a river. The wind doesn't just blow here - it delivers.
EXT. AGUAVERDE --- MAIN STREET --- DAY
Small town. Not dying, but not thriving. The kind of place that exists because it always has.
A Desert Freeze. A hardware store. A laundromat. A church with a marquee that reads: "GOD ANSWERS KNEE-MAIL."
Older buildings are adobe - thick walls, rounded corners, the color of the earth. Newer buildings are cinder block. The clash tells the town's history: generations here, then money arrived, then the money built cheap.
A water tower reads: AGUAVERDE - EST. 1923
Green water. The name is a memory now. Or a prayer.
Town Hall: two-story, 1970s brown brick. American flag hanging limp.
Gil parks. Gets out. Binder under arm.
He looks at the building.
GIL
(to himself)
Forty-three votes. Here we go.
He walks in.
5. THE INSTALLATION
INT. TOWN COUNCIL CHAMBER --- DAY
The room is small. Wood-paneled walls. Fluorescent lights that buzz slightly. Folding chairs for the public, mostly empty. A raised dais for the council.
At the center of the dais: WADE SUTTER (50s). Good suit - not expensive, but well-maintained. The kind of handsome that comes from confidence more than genetics. He's been running this room for twelve years and everyone knows it.
Flanking Wade: four COUNCIL MEMBERS. They have the look of people who showed up because someone had to.
At the staff table: SANDRA WALSH (40s). Town manager. The person who actually knows where the bodies are buried, metaphorically speaking. She has a legal pad and a pen and the expression of someone who has seen many installations and expects nothing from this one.
ANGLE ON: SANDRA'S LEGAL PAD. ELECTION RESULTS. THE NUMBER WRITTEN
there, clear: 42.
The shot holds for one second.
Scattered in the folding chairs: a REPORTER from the local paper (young, bored), an ELDERLY COUPLE (here for the air conditioning), and DOLORES VEGA (60s), Town Clerk and Election Supervisor - thirty-two years in the same office, longer than anyone else in the building. She's knitting something indeterminate and watching everything.
Gil stands at the front of the room. Binder under arm.
Wade bangs the gavel.
WADE
This special session of the Aguaverde Town Council is called to order.
We are gathered to administer the oath of office to the winner of last
month's special mayoral election.
He pauses. Looks at his notes. The pause is theatrical.
WADE
(CONT'D)
Mr. Gilbert Padilla received forty-three votes in the special
election, representing a plurality of ballots cast.
ANGLE ON: SANDRA. A MICRO-HESITATION. SHE GLANCES AT HER LEGAL PAD - AT
the 42 - then back at Wade. Says nothing.
ANGLE ON: DOLORES. SHE LOOKS UP FROM HER KNITTING. HER EYES FIND
Sandra's legal pad. Then Gil. Then back to her needles.
She's smiling. Slightly.
COUNCIL MEMBER HOLT
How many total votes were cast?
WADE
Forty-three.
GIL
Forty-three votes. I'm aware.
Scattered, uncomfortable laughter.
COUNCIL MEMBER HOLT
So he got... all of them?
WADE
All forty-three, yes.
COUNCIL MEMBER MORALES
How is that possible?
WADE
Low turnout. The election was held on a Tuesday in April. During a
thunderstorm.
SANDRA
(checking notes, a beat of hesitation)
Technically, the lowest turnout in town history. The previous record
was the 1987 water board election, which had fifty-one votes.
WADE
So we're making history.
GIL
Forty-three votes' worth of history.
WADE
The town charter requires that special election results be certified
regardless of turnout, provided the election was properly noticed and
conducted. It was. Mr. Padilla won. And so.
He gestures.
WADE
(CONT'D)
Mr. Padilla. Please approach.
Gil walks to the dais. His boots are loud on the wooden floor.
WADE
(CONT'D)
Raise your right hand.
Gil raises his left hand. Realizes. Switches.
WADE
(CONT'D)
Do you, Gilbert Padilla, solemnly swear to faithfully execute the
duties of Mayor of Aguaverde, to uphold the constitution of the State
of New Mexico and the charter of this town, and to serve the citizens
of this community to the best of your ability, so help you God?
GIL
I do.
WADE
Then by the authority vested in me as Council President under Section
2.4 of the town charter, I hereby declare you Mayor of Aguaverde.
He doesn't extend his hand.
Instead, he slides a manila folder across the dais.
WADE
(CONT'D)
Your welcome packet. Meeting schedules, contact information, parking
validation procedures. Sandra can answer any questions about
day-to-day operations.
GIL
Thank you. I'll try not to let my forty-three constituents down.
He picks up the folder. Doesn't open it.
WADE
The next regular council meeting is Thursday at seven PM. Agenda items
must be submitted by Tuesday at five. I'd recommend reviewing the
procedures manual before then. Section four covers speaking
privileges. Section seven covers motions and voting. Section twelve
covers -
GIL
I've read the procedures manual.
WADE
Have you.
A beat. Wade glances at the reporter. Then back at Gil.
WADE
(CONT'D)
Well. I'm sure the council looks forward to your... perspective.
Though I'd suggest keeping the agenda focused on municipal matters.
Roads. Drainage. Zoning. The things people actually voted for.
The room is quiet. Everyone understands what he's not saying.
WADE
(CONT'D)
(to the reporter, almost casual)
You can quote that. "Council President welcomes new mayor, encourages
focus on local issues." That's the story.
The reporter writes it down. Gil watches.
The nickname is never spoken. It doesn't have to be. The containment is already complete.
GIL
Twice. Also the charter, the municipal code, the budget documents
going back to 2018, and the council minutes from the past three years.
Silence.
WADE
That's... thorough.
GIL
I like to be prepared.
WADE
For what?
Gil doesn't answer.
He opens his binder. Flips to a tabbed section. Pulls out a single sheet
of paper.
GIL
I'd like to submit an agenda item for Thursday's meeting.
WADE
Already?
GIL
A resolution requesting water quality testing data from the state
Environment Department. Specifically, any testing conducted within ten
miles of Aguaverde related to injection well operations.
The room shifts. Something in the air changes.
WADE
That's... an unusual first request.
GIL
There are fourteen households on Oak Street reporting brown water and
foundation damage. I'd like to know why.
WADE
Those are separate issues. Water quality and foundation damage
aren't -
GIL
Maybe. Maybe not. That's what testing would tell us.
WADE
Injection well regulation is a state matter. The town doesn't have
jurisdiction.
GIL
I'm not asking for jurisdiction. I'm asking for information.
Wade looks at him. Really looks at him. The way you look at something
you thought was harmless and now aren't sure.
WADE
We'll add it to the agenda.
GIL
Thank you.
WADE
Is there anything else?
GIL
Not today.
WADE
Then this session is adjourned.
He bangs the gavel.
Gil gathers his binder. Walks out.
As he passes Dolores, she looks up from her knitting. Their eyes meet.
She glances at Sandra's legal pad - still visible on the staff table.
Then back at Gil.
DOLORES
(quietly)
Congratulations, Mayor.
GIL
Thank you.
DOLORES
Forty-three votes.
GIL
That's what they tell me.
She holds his gaze a moment too long. Then goes back to her knitting.
But she's smiling. Slightly.
6. THE HALLWAY
INT. TOWN HALL --- HALLWAY --- CONTINUOUS
Gil walks out of the chamber. Sandra catches up, heels clicking on the linoleum.
SANDRA
Mayor Padilla.
GIL
Gil.
SANDRA
Gil. Sandra Walsh. Town manager. We spoke on the phone.
GIL
I remember.
SANDRA
That was... something.
GIL
I submitted an agenda item.
SANDRA
You ambushed Wade with an injection well resolution on your first day.
GIL
Is that what I did?
SANDRA
That's what he's going to think you did.
GIL
I asked about water quality.
SANDRA
You asked about injection wells. That's not the same thing. Not in
this town.
They stop walking. Sandra looks both ways. Lowers her voice.
SANDRA (CONT'D)
Rayborn Energy is the largest employer in the region. They fund the
community health initiative. They sponsor the Little League. They
donate to the volunteer fire department. Half the town works for them
directly or indirectly.
GIL
I'm aware.
SANDRA
You know about the aquifer?
GIL
Estancia Basin.
SANDRA
There's no backup. No river to tap. No pipeline from somewhere else.
If the aquifer goes bad, the town goes with it. That's not metaphor.
That's hydrology.
GIL
I'm aware.
SANDRA
Are you? Because when you ask questions about injection wells, you're
asking questions about Rayborn. And when you ask questions about
Rayborn, people get nervous.
GIL
Should they be nervous?
SANDRA
I don't know. That's above my pay grade. But I know that Wade has
been council president for twelve years, and in that time, nobody has
asked the questions you just asked.
GIL
Why not?
SANDRA
Because nobody wanted the answers.
GIL
I got forty-three votes. How much more difficult can things get?
Sandra almost says something. Stops. Her expression flickers - something
about the number. But she lets it go.
She hands him a key on a plain ring.
SANDRA
Your office. Room 104. The key sticks. Jiggle it left, then right,
then pull while you turn. The coffee maker hasn't worked since
2019. IF YOU NEED ANYTHING, MY OFFICE IS DOWN THE HALL.
GIL
And if I need records?
SANDRA
Dolores Vega. Clerk's office. End of the hall. Window six. She handles
all the records, certifications, elections - anything with a stamp goes through her.
GIL
The woman with the knitting.
SANDRA
She's been here longer than the building. You noticed.
GIL
I notice things.
Sandra looks at him.
SANDRA
I know. I've listened to your podcast.
Gil goes still.
SANDRA (CONT'D)
All of it. One hundred and fifty-three episodes. Took me about a
month.
GIL
And?
SANDRA
And I think you're either the smartest person who's ever held this
office or the craziest. Possibly both.
GIL
Which do you want me to be?
SANDRA
I want you to be careful. Wade plays a long game. He won't confront
you directly. He'll just... make things difficult. Procedures that
take longer than they should. Documents that get lost. Meetings that
get rescheduled.
GIL
Death by bureaucracy.
SANDRA
It's effective.
GIL
I know. That's how they denied my mother's claim. Not by saying no.
He doesn't finish the sentence.
Sandra is quiet for a moment.
SANDRA
I'm sorry about your mother.
GIL
Everyone is.
SANDRA
Is that why you're here? The pattern?
GIL
I'm here because forty-three people voted for me.
SANDRA
That's not an answer.
GIL
It's the only one I have.
He walks toward his office.
SANDRA
Mayor.
He stops.
SANDRA (CONT'D)
The number. 1-6-3-8. Does it mean anything to you here? In Aguaverde?
Gil turns.
GIL
Not yet.
He walks away.
Sandra watches him go. She looks down at her legal pad. At the 42
written there.
She crosses it out. Writes 43.
7. GIL'S OFFICE
INT. TOWN HALL --- GIL'S OFFICE --- DAY
Small. A desk that's older than Gil. A window that looks out on the parking lot. A corkboard on the wall, empty.
Gil enters. Jiggles the key left, right, pulls while turning. The door opens.
He sets down his binder. Looks around.
Opens the desk drawers. Empty except for paper clips, a dried-out pen, and a 1994 calendar.
He takes out his phone. Photographs the room.
From his bag, he pulls: pushpins, red string, a ruler, a black marker, a red marker, a stack of index cards.
He begins.
TIME
PASSAGE - MONTAGE:
- Gil pins a map of Aguaverde to the corkboard.
- He marks Oak Street with a red dot.
- He pins the invoice he received in his welcome packet. Something catches his eye. He circles a number: the invoice total. \$16,380.00.
- He pins a yellowed MATERIAL REQUISITION packet: OAK STREET SUBDIVISION - FOUNDATION FILL: 1,638 CUBIC YARDS. Supplier: RED MESA RECLAMATION (RECLAIMED). A box is checked in pen: 'NO CERTIFICATION ON FILE.'
- He pins a printout of injection well permits. Circles another number: PERMIT #2024-1638.
- He sits back. Stares.
- From his bag, he pulls the framed photograph of his mother. Sets it on the desk, facing him.
- He writes on an index card: "COINCIDENCE?"
- Pins it to the board.
- Writes on another card: "DON'T MENTION THE PATTERN."
- Doesn't pin this one. Puts it in his pocket.
END
MONTAGE.
Gil stands before the corkboard. It's sparse. Nothing like the wall at
home. But it's a start.
A knock at the door.
He turns. Dolores stands in the doorway, knitting in hand.
DOLORES
Settling in?
GIL
Trying.
She looks at the corkboard. At the circled numbers.
DOLORES
Interesting decorating choices.
GIL
I like to see things.
DOLORES
Most mayors put up pictures of their family. Maybe a calendar. A
plant.
GIL
I don't have a plant.
DOLORES
No.
She steps into the room. Looks at the board more closely. Her eyes find
the circled numbers.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
Sixteen three eighty. That's an unusual amount for a drainage
invoice.
GIL
Is it?
DOLORES
Usually they round. Fifteen thousand. Twenty thousand. Easier for
everyone.
GIL
But this one didn't.
DOLORES
No. This one didn't.
She looks at him.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
I've been here thirty-seven years, Mayor.
GIL
Gil.
DOLORES
Mayor. I've seen a lot of people come through this building. Council
members, managers, mayors. Most of them want the title. The parking
space. The chance to feel important.
GIL
And me?
DOLORES
I don't know yet.
She turns to leave.
GIL
Dolores.
She stops.
GIL
(CONT'D)
The permit number. 2024-1638. Is that sequential? Or is there a
system?
DOLORES
Permit numbers are assigned by the state. I don't control them.
GIL
But you've seen them. For years.
DOLORES
I've seen a lot of things for years.
GIL
Have you ever seen that sequence before? One-six-three-eight?
Dolores is still.
DOLORES
Why do you ask?
GIL
I notice things.
DOLORES
So I've heard.
She doesn't answer the question. Instead:
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
If you need records, my window is open until four-thirty. Requests
submitted after that wait until the next business day.
GIL
I'll remember that.
DOLORES
Most people don't.
She leaves.
Gil looks at the corkboard.
Pulls the index card from his pocket. "DON'T MENTION THE PATTERN."
He pins it to the board.
Then unpins it.
Puts it back in his pocket.
8. THE RECORDS REQUEST
INT. TOWN HALL --- CLERK'S OFFICE --- DAY
A window. Small. Sliding glass panel. A slot for documents.
Behind the window: Dolores, back at her station. Knitting resumed.
Gil approaches with a stack of forms. He slides them through the slot.
They don't fit. Too thick.
DOLORES
Fold them.
GIL
What?
DOLORES
Lengthwise. Then they fit.
Gil folds. Slides.
Dolores picks them up. Examines each one.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
All correspondence between the town and Rayborn Energy, 2020 to
present.
GIL
Yes.
DOLORES
That's five hundred pages. Minimum.
GIL
I'll read them.
DOLORES
Permit applications for injection wells, same period.
GIL
Yes.
DOLORES
That's state jurisdiction. We only have copies of what was filed
locally.
GIL
I understand.
DOLORES
Payments to Rayborn contractors, 2020 to present.
GIL
Yes.
DOLORES
You want to see how much we've paid them.
GIL
I want to see how much we've paid, what we paid for, and who approved
the payments.
DOLORES
That's thorough.
GIL
I'm a thorough person.
Dolores looks at the last form.
DOLORES
Council executive session minutes. 2020 to present.
GIL
Yes.
DOLORES
Those are confidential.
GIL
I'm the mayor.
DOLORES
Mayors don't automatically get executive session minutes. Section 8.4
of the charter. Executive session records are only released by
majority vote of the council or pursuant to a court order.
GIL
Then I'll request a council vote.
DOLORES
That requires a motion. Which requires agenda submission. Which closes
Tuesday at five. It's currently Friday at three forty-seven.
GIL
Then I'll submit it Tuesday.
DOLORES
And the council will vote Thursday.
GIL
And if they say no?
DOLORES
Then you don't get the minutes.
GIL
What's in the minutes that requires a vote?
DOLORES
I wouldn't know. They're confidential.
She stamps the first three forms. RECEIVED. RECEIVED. RECEIVED.
She sets aside the fourth.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
Fifteen business days for the first three. The fourth requires a
council vote before I can process it.
GIL
Fifteen business days. The policy says five.
DOLORES
The policy says five. Legal review adds ten.
GIL
Legal review? For correspondence?
DOLORES
For everything involving Rayborn.
GIL
Why?
DOLORES
Because the town attorney advised it.
GIL
Who's the town attorney?
DOLORES
Gerald Foster. Wade appointed him in 2019.
GIL
Wade appointed the town attorney.
DOLORES
The council president has appointment authority under Section 3.2.
GIL
So Wade controls what records get released.
DOLORES
The town attorney advises on legal review. The council president
appoints the town attorney. I just stamp things.
GIL
And if I wanted to expedite the review?
DOLORES
You'd need to convince the town attorney that expedition was
warranted.
GIL
And if I went to the state? Filed a complaint about the delay?
Dolores looks up from her knitting. For the first time, something like
approval in her expression.
DOLORES
That would be... unusual.
GIL
Unusual good or unusual bad?
DOLORES
Unusual interesting.
She hands him his receipts.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
Fifteen business days, Mayor. I'll call you when they're ready.
GIL
Thank you, Dolores.
DOLORES
Don't thank me. I just stamp things.
Gil turns to leave.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
Mayor.
He stops.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
The number you asked about. The sequence.
GIL
Yes?
DOLORES
I've worked in this office for thirty-seven years. I've processed
thousands of permits, hundreds of invoices, dozens of contracts.
GIL
And?
DOLORES
And elections. I process those too.
A beat.
GIL
The elections.
DOLORES
The certifications. The ballots. The counts. All of it goes through
this window.
GIL
Including mine.
DOLORES
Including yours.
She picks up her knitting.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
I've never noticed a pattern.
She pauses.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
But I've never looked.
She goes back to her work.
Gil leaves.
9. WADE'S OFFICE
INT. TOWN HALL --- WADE'S OFFICE --- DAY
Larger than Gil's. Better furniture. A window with an actual view. Photos on the wall: Wade shaking hands with governors, senators, executives.
Wade sits behind his desk. Sandra stands by the door.
WADE
He filed records requests?
SANDRA
Four of them. Rayborn correspondence, permits, payments, and executive
session minutes.
WADE
The executive sessions are confidential.
SANDRA
I told him. He's going to ask for a council vote.
WADE
On Thursday?
SANDRA
That's my assumption.
Wade leans back in his chair.
WADE
The podcast guy.
SANDRA
He prefers "mayor."
WADE
Forty-three votes.
SANDRA
Still mayor.
WADE
You listen to his podcast?
SANDRA
I did some research. After he filed.
WADE
And?
SANDRA
He's not stupid. He's... thorough. Obsessive. He sees connections
between things that may or may not exist.
WADE
The number thing.
SANDRA 1-6-3-8. He believes it's embedded in government documents. Connected to nuclear testing, institutional cover-ups, his mother's denied RECA claim.
WADE
So he's crazy.
SANDRA
Maybe. Or maybe he's the kind of crazy that's also right sometimes.
WADE
He asked about injection wells. In his first meeting.
SANDRA
He asked about water quality on Oak Street.
WADE
Same thing.
SANDRA
Is it?
Wade looks at her sharply.
WADE
What's that supposed to mean?
SANDRA
Nothing. Just that he asked about water, not wells. The connection
was... implied.
WADE
The connection was obvious.
SANDRA
To you.
WADE
To anyone who's paying attention.
SANDRA
Then maybe we should figure out what he's paying attention to.
Wade stands. Walks to the window.
WADE
What do you know about Oak Street?
SANDRA
Fourteen households have filed complaints about water quality in the
past year. Brown water, low pressure, occasional odor.
WADE
And foundation damage?
SANDRA
Six reports. Cracks, settling, some flooding. All within the past
eighteen months.
WADE
What did we do about it?
SANDRA
Referred them to the water utility. The utility tested at the main and
found nothing. They advised the homeowners to check their internal
plumbing.
WADE
And the foundation damage?
SANDRA
Not our department. We suggested they contact their insurance.
WADE
Did anyone follow up?
SANDRA
No.
Wade is quiet.
WADE
The drainage project. The one Rayborn did in 2022.
SANDRA
What about it?
WADE
It was supposed to fix the flooding on Oak Street.
SANDRA
Did it?
WADE
I don't know. That's the problem.
SANDRA
What do you mean?
WADE
I mean I signed the payment authorization. But I don't remember who
verified the work.
SANDRA
There should be a verification signature on the invoice.
WADE
There should be.
SANDRA
Is there?
Wade doesn't answer.
SANDRA
(CONT'D)
Wade. Is there?
WADE
I'll have to check.
Sandra looks at him.
SANDRA
You don't know if the work was verified.
WADE
I know it was done. I saw the trucks. I saw the crews.
SANDRA
But you don't know if anyone confirmed it was done correctly.
WADE
It was a reputable contractor.
SANDRA
That's not verification.
WADE
Sandra.
SANDRA
I'm not accusing you of anything. But if the new mayor starts pulling
records and he finds invoices without verification signatures...
WADE
It was an oversight.
SANDRA
One oversight?
WADE
I don't know.
SANDRA
How many invoices have you signed without verification?
WADE
I don't know.
SANDRA
Wade.
WADE
I don't know, Sandra. That's the honest answer. I trusted the
contractors. I trusted the process. I didn't check every line on
every invoice.
SANDRA
And if he finds that?
WADE
Then I'll explain it was an oversight.
SANDRA
Multiple oversights? Over multiple years?
Wade turns from the window.
WADE
What do you want me to say?
SANDRA
I want you to tell me if there's something I should know.
Long pause.
WADE
There's nothing to know.
He doesn't sound convinced.
10. THE PODCAST - GIL RECORDING
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- NIGHT
Gil sits at his desk. The wall looms behind him. Microphone in front of him. Recording equipment.
He hasn't published a new episode in three years. But the setup is still there.
He's not recording for the public. He's recording for himself. A habit. Thinking out loud.
GIL
(into microphone)
Day one. Installation complete. Wade Sutter looks at me like I'm
something he found on his shoe.
He pauses. Looks at his notes.
GIL (CONT'D)
The drainage invoice. Rayborn Environmental Services. Sixteen thousand
three hundred eighty dollars. I noticed it the moment I saw it.
1-6-3-8.
He pins the invoice to the wall. Steps back. Stares at it.
He looks at the microphone.
GIL (CONT'D)
I don't know how many of you are left. The numbers don't update anymore. Could be thousands. Could be twelve. Could be one.
Beat. His eyes drift toward the lens - almost. Not quite.
GIL (CONT'D)
I'm not talking to everyone. I'm talking to the one person who's still listening. The one who hasn't turned it off yet.
He pauses.
GIL (CONT'D)
If you're out there... stay with me.
He stops recording.
CUT TO:
11. WADE'S HOUSE
INT. WADE'S HOUSE --- STUDY --- NIGHT
Wade alone at his desk. Documents spread before him. Financial statements. Medical bills. A calculator.
He's doing math. The kind of math that never works out.
He opens a drawer. Pulls out a file. RAYBORN COMMUNITY PARTNERSHIP - CONFIDENTIAL.
Inside: a letter. He's read it before. Reads it again.
"In recognition of Council President Sutter's ongoing support for regional economic development, Rayborn Energy is pleased to extend..."
He closes the file. Puts it back.
Picks up his phone. Dials.
WADE
(into phone)
This is Wade Sutter. I need to speak with someone about the community
health initiative... Yes, I'll hold.
He waits. Looks at the medical bills.
WADE
(CONT'D)
Yes. I'm calling about the prescription coverage for my wife.
Caroline Sutter... There was a question about authorization...
He listens. His expression shifts. Relief. Then something darker.
WADE
(CONT'D)
It's been resolved? When?... I see. Thank you.
He hangs up. Stares at the phone.
Someone made a call. Someone took care of it. Someone wants him to know they can take care of things.
He walks to the window. Looks out at the dark.
WADE (CONT'D) (to himself) Forty-seven jobs. Forty-seven families.
He counts them in his head. The names. The faces.
WADE
(CONT'D)
Martinez. Garcia. Salazar. The Benavideses -
He stops. Tommy Benavides. The one who asked questions. The one who's
in Odessa now.
WADE
(CONT'D)
The clinic. The school. The roads.
He turns from the window.
WADE
(CONT'D)
And the water's been the same for thirty years. Same tests. Same
reports. Same "within acceptable limits."
He sits down. Heavily.
WADE
(CONT'D)
Nothing changes. Nothing ever changes. Except now there's a mayor who
got forty-three votes and thinks he can -
A door opens upstairs. Footsteps on the stairs.
CAROLINE
SUTTER (50s) appears in the doorway. Robe. Slippers. She was pretty
once, in a way that suggested energy. Now she looks diminished.
CAROLINE
Who was that?
WADE
Work.
CAROLINE
It's eleven.
WADE
The new mayor. He's causing concerns.
CAROLINE
The podcast man.
WADE
You know about him?
CAROLINE
Martha texted me. She said you looked upset at the installation.
WADE
I wasn't upset.
CAROLINE
What were you?
WADE
Annoyed. There's a difference.
Caroline moves to the refrigerator. Opens it. Stares inside the way
people do when they're not really looking for food.
CAROLINE
What does he want?
WADE
I don't know yet. Records. Information. Questions nobody's asked in
a long time.
CAROLINE
About Rayborn?
WADE
About everything. But Rayborn is where it leads.
CAROLINE
Is that a problem?
Wade doesn't answer right away.
WADE
You know what happens if that plant closes?
CAROLINE
Jobs.
WADE
Forty-seven jobs. Forty-seven families. The clinic loses its biggest
donor. The school loses half its tax base.
He stands. Walks to her.
WADE
(CONT'D)
And the water? Gets tested by the same state agency that's been
testing it for thirty years. Same reports. Same limits. Nothing
changes except people lose their houses.
CAROLINE
And if the water is actually bad?
WADE
Then it's been bad for years. And we've all been drinking it.
He looks at her.
WADE
(CONT'D)
Including you.
Silence.
CAROLINE
I need to refill my prescription tomorrow. The pharmacy said there was
a question about the authorization.
WADE
It's been resolved.
CAROLINE
How do you know?
WADE
I called.
CAROLINE
When?
WADE
Just now.
CAROLINE
And it's resolved. Just like that.
WADE
Just like that.
She looks at him. Knows something is wrong. Knows better than to ask.
CAROLINE
I'm scared, Wade. Not of the cancer. Of whatever you're not telling
me.
She goes upstairs.
Wade stands alone in the kitchen.
12. DESTINY'S APARTMENT
INT. DESTINY'S APARTMENT --- NIGHT
Small. Clean. The apartment of someone who has carefully constructed a normal life.
Plants on the windowsill. A bookshelf with nursing textbooks and romance novels. A cat tree in the corner.
DESTINY PADILLA (30s) sits on the couch, laptop open, scrolling. She's looking at news articles about the installation.
On the screen: "CONSPIRACY PODCASTER BECOMES AGUAVERDE MAYOR WITH 43 VOTES"
She closes the laptop.
LORETTA, a tabby cat, jumps onto the couch. Destiny pulls her close.
DESTINY
(to the cat)
He's going to do it again. You know that, right? He's going to start
a crusade, make enemies, burn everything down, and I'm going to have
to explain to my boss why my father is on the news.
Loretta purrs.
DESTINY
(CONT'D)
I moved back here because it was supposed to be quiet. Because rent
was cheap and the clinic was hiring and I thought - I thought maybe I
could have a normal life.
She sets down the cat.
DESTINY
(CONT'D)
Normal. With him as my father.
She pulls out her phone. Types: Can we talk?
Sends it.
Waits.
The reply comes: Tomorrow. Desert Freeze. 11 AM.
She stares at the message.
DESTINY
(to Loretta)
Desert Freeze. Of course. Because nothing says "serious
conversation" like soft-serve.
13. DESERT FREEZE - DESTINY AND GIL
INT. DESERT FREEZE --- DAY
Plastic booths. Fluorescent lights. The smell of fryer oil and frozen dairy.
Gil sits in a booth. Binder on the table. He's made notes on index cards.
Destiny enters. Sees him. Sighs.
She gets in line. Orders. Pays. Sits across from him with a Mesa Swirl she doesn't want.
GIL
You look tired.
DESTINY
I worked the night shift.
GIL
You should sleep.
DESTINY
I will. After we talk.
She stirs the Mesa Swirl. Doesn't eat.
DESTINY
(CONT'D)
Dad. What are you doing?
GIL
My job.
DESTINY
Your job is to cut ribbons and smile for photos.
GIL
I don't smile.
DESTINY
I know.
GIL
And I'm not good at ribbons.
DESTINY
I know that too.
She sets down her spoon.
DESTINY
(CONT'D)
I saw the news. "Conspiracy podcaster becomes mayor." The article
mentioned your podcast. All one hundred and fifty-three episodes.
GIL
I haven't published anything in three years.
DESTINY
It doesn't matter. The internet remembers. My coworkers remember.
When I got to the clinic this morning, three people asked me if my
father really believes a four-digit number controls the government.
One of them found that old interview - the reporter who ambushed me
outside the hospital. Five years ago. Still circulating.
GIL
That's not what I believe.
DESTINY
Then what do you believe?
Gil is quiet for a moment.
GIL
I believe patterns exist. I believe powerful institutions leave
traces. I believe that when people in power want to hide something,
they hide it in plain sight - in numbers, in forms, in the boring
details nobody looks at.
DESTINY
And 1-6-3-8?
GIL
Was Mom's case number.
DESTINY
I know what it was.
GIL
Then you know why I can't let it go.
DESTINY
She's been dead for twenty years, Dad.
GIL
Twenty-two.
DESTINY
Twenty-two years. And you're still fighting the same fight.
GIL
I'm fighting a different fight. Oak Street. Brown water. Foundation
damage. Real problems affecting real people.
DESTINY
And it has nothing to do with the pattern?
Gil hesitates.
DESTINY
(CONT'D)
Dad.
GIL
The drainage invoice is sixteen thousand three hundred eighty dollars.
DESTINY
Jesus Christ.
GIL
The permit number for the nearest injection well is 2024-1638.
DESTINY
Dad -
GIL
I'm not saying it means anything. I'm saying I noticed. That's all.
I noticed, and I'm going to look into it, and if there's nothing
there, fine. But if there's something -
DESTINY
If there's something, you'll tear this whole town apart looking for
it. Just like you did before.
GIL
I didn't tear anything apart. I asked questions. I made a podcast. I
followed the paper.
DESTINY
And Mom still died. And you still spent every Christmas talking about
RECA amendments instead of asking me about my life. And I still had to
explain to every boyfriend I ever had why my father thinks the
government encodes secrets in bureaucratic forms.
Silence.
GIL
I'm sorry.
DESTINY
I know you're sorry. You're always sorry. That's not the point.
GIL
What's the point?
DESTINY
The point is I moved back here to have a normal life. The point is I
work at a clinic that's forty percent funded by Rayborn Energy. The
point is if you start a war with them, I'm the one who pays for it.
GIL
I'm not starting a war.
DESTINY
You asked about injection wells. In your first meeting.
GIL
I asked about water quality.
DESTINY
Same thing, Dad. You know it's the same thing.
Gil looks at her.
GIL
If the injection wells are contaminating the water, don't you want to
know?
DESTINY
I want to keep my job.
GIL
Even if your job is funded by people poisoning your neighbors?
DESTINY
You don't know they're poisoning anyone.
GIL
No. I don't. That's why I'm asking questions.
DESTINY
And what gives you the right? You got forty-three votes, Dad.
Forty-three people in a town of eight thousand.
That makes me the mayor. I'm already the crazy conspiracy mayor. I might as well be a useful one.
Destiny pushes her Mesa Swirl away.
DESTINY
I'm not asking you to stop. I know that's pointless. I'm asking you
to be careful. To think about consequences. To consider, just once,
that other people exist and that your actions affect them.
GIL
I think about you.
DESTINY
Do you?
GIL
Every day.
DESTINY
Then think about this: if you become the crazy conspiracy mayor who
attacks the town's biggest employer, my life gets very hard. My job
gets very hard. Everything gets very hard.
GIL
And if I don't say anything? And the water stays brown? And the
foundations keep cracking?
DESTINY
Then someone else can fix it.
GIL
Who?
She doesn't have an answer.
DESTINY
I have to go. I need to sleep before my shift tonight.
GIL
Destiny -
DESTINY
Loretta needs to be fed.
GIL
Who's Loretta?
Destiny stares at him.
DESTINY
My cat. She's been my cat for two years.
GIL
I didn't -
DESTINY
No. You didn't know. Because you don't ask. You don't visit. You
don't call unless you want something. You notice patterns in
government documents but you can't remember that your daughter has a
cat.
She stands.
GIL
I'll do better.
DESTINY
Mom always said you gave me your attention. Like it was genetic. Like I couldn't help but notice things.
GIL
That's not a gift.
DESTINY
She didn't say it was a gift. She said it was yours.
Beat.
DESTINY (CONT'D)
I didn't want it. But here I am - counting your bank steps in my head.
GIL
Destiny -
DESTINY
Don't make promises, Dad. Just... be careful.
She walks out. Gil follows.
14. THE BANK STEPS
EXT. FIRST STATE BANK --- DAY
Late afternoon. Golden hour light cuts across the stone.
Destiny pushes through the Desert Freeze door and heads for her car. Gil follows - half apology, half reflex.
They pass the steps of FIRST STATE BANK. Wide stone stairs. Municipal grandeur from another era.
Gil stops.
DESTINY
Dad, my car is -
But he's already crouching. The worn ruler comes out of his binder like a reflex. He extends it across the width of the top step.
GIL
One-forty-one.
DESTINY
Dad. Please.
He doesn't hear her. He's measuring the next step down. Then the next.
A WOMAN
WITH A STROLLER passes. Glances at the man crouching on the bank steps
with a ruler. Looks at Destiny. Keeps walking.
Destiny doesn't move. Arms crossed. Jaw tight.
GIL
Code says you need a center rail every sixty inches. These steps are a
hundred forty-one inches wide. Should be three rails. There's two.
DESTINY
This isn't -
GIL
(still measuring)
They skipped the middle one. The one you'd actually grab if you fell.
Because it's cheaper. Because nobody checks.
A BUSINESSMAN in a suit walks up the steps, giving Gil a wide berth. He catches Destiny's eye. She looks away.
GIL (CONT'D)
This is life safety, Destiny. This is the promise. The thing they sign
off on and then forget.
He stands. Brushes off his knees. Looks at the steps like they've
confessed something.
He notices something in the concrete. Crouches again. Scrapes at the
aggregate with his thumbnail. Gray grit. Unusual texture.
He writes in his notebook: "Fill source?"
GIL (CONT'D)
If they'll cheat in daylight - on something everyone walks
past - imagine what they'll bury under a slab. Where nobody looks.
Destiny watches him. Not the steps. Him.
The way he sees what no one else sees.
The way it costs him everything.
A gust of wind pushes grit across the concrete.
DESTINY
(quiet)
I'm going to work.
She walks to her car. Doesn't look back.
HOLD
ON: GIL.
He stands at the bottom of the steps. Looking up at the absent rail. The
empty space where safety should be.
He doesn't follow her.
After a moment, he goes back inside the Desert Freeze.
INT. DESERT FREEZE --- CONTINUOUS
Gil sits alone at the booth. The binder closed in front of him.
Destiny's Mesa Swirl sits across from him. Untouched. Mint chip melting.
He looks at it.
Pulls it toward himself. Takes a bite.
Looks out the window at her car pulling away.
The "Home of the Mesa Swirl" sign buzzes in the window. Neon flicker.
15. WADE'S HOUSE - THE WEIGHT
INT. WADE'S HOUSE --- KITCHEN --- NIGHT
Wade stands at the sink. Doesn't turn on the water. Just stands there.
The kitchen is modest. Clean. Photos on the refrigerator - Wade and Caroline at various ages. A calendar with doctor's appointments marked in red.
He's alone. Caroline is asleep upstairs. The house is quiet.
He's doing the math. The math he does every night.
WADE
(to himself)
Forty-seven jobs.
He looks out the window. At the dark.
WADE (CONT'D)
Forty-seven families.
He starts counting on his fingers. Not theatrically. Privately. The way
someone does when they're trying to hold onto something.
WADE (CONT'D)
Martinez. Garcia. Salazar. The Benavideses -
He stops.
Tommy Benavides. The one who asked questions. The one who's in Odessa
now. Lost his job. Lost his marriage.
Wade stares at nothing.
WADE (CONT'D)
(quieter)
Tommy.
A long beat. The weight of that name.
Then he continues. Quieter now.
WADE (CONT'D)
The Romeros. The Padillas - no relation. The Vigils.
He runs out of fingers. Keeps going anyway.
WADE (CONT'D)
Half the volunteer fire department. The clinic's biggest donor. The
school's tax base.
He turns from the window.
WADE (CONT'D)
If Rayborn closes, this town dies. Not slowly. Fast. The way towns die
when the money leaves.
He sits down at the kitchen table. There's a pill organizer there.
Caroline's. Seven days. Morning and night.
He touches it.
WADE (CONT'D)
And Caroline's insurance. The experimental treatment. The one that's
working.
He doesn't say the rest. Doesn't need to. Rayborn's supplemental
coverage. The coverage that appeared after Wade stopped asking questions.
He looks at his hands.
WADE (CONT'D)
I'm not a bad man.
Silence.
WADE (CONT'D)
I'm a man who made a choice.
He hears footsteps upstairs. Caroline moving. Maybe awake. Maybe just
shifting in her sleep.
He waits.
The footsteps stop.
He exhales.
WADE (CONT'D)
And the water? Gets tested. Same agency. Same reports. Same limits.
Thirty years, nothing changes.
He's rehearsing. Preparing for a conversation he might have to have.
Or a conversation he's already had with himself a thousand times.
WADE (CONT'D)
If it's bad, it's been bad for years. We've all been drinking it.
He looks at the ceiling. At where Caroline sleeps.
WADE (CONT'D)
Including her.
He puts his head in his hands.
This is Wade's tragedy. Not that he's evil. That he's not. That he's a man who loves his wife and knows his neighbors' names and made a choice that poisons both.
The kitchen clock ticks.
Wade sits alone with the weight of forty-seven families.
And one name he can't say twice.
16. THE WALL COMES DOWN
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- NIGHT
Gil enters. Slams the door.
He stands in front of the wall. The pattern. Years of work. Red string and pushpins and documents and photographs.
He stares at it.
Then he rips down an index card.
Then another.
Then a photograph. A permit. An invoice.
He's not crying. He's not screaming.
The red string tangles in his hands. He pulls. Pushpins scatter across the floor like teeth.
The map of New Mexico tears. The timeline shreds.
He reaches the center. His mother's photograph. The cracked glass. The denial letter. Case #1638.
He stops.
His hand hovers.
He can't do it.
He sinks to the floor. Surrounded by the wreckage of his obsession. Index cards and permits and string.
He picks up his mother's photograph. Holds it.
GIL
(quiet)
I'm sorry, Mom. I'm sorry I couldn't -
He stops. Looks at the mess around him.
Picks up an index card. Reads it.
Pins it back to the wall.
Picks up another. Pins it.
He's rebuilding. Slowly. Methodically. The same compulsion that made him tear it down now makes him put it back together.
He can't stop. He doesn't want to stop.
The wall will be rebuilt by morning.
CUT TO:
17. ELENA'S HOUSE - THE BASEMENT
INT. ELENA'S HOUSE --- BASEMENT --- DAY
The smell of mold. Water stains on the walls. A crack running from floor to ceiling, wide enough to see daylight through.
Gil photographs everything. The crack. The water stains. The warped floor tiles.
Elena watches from the stairs.
ELENA
It started about a year ago. Right after they opened that new
injection site.
GIL
Which site?
ELENA
The Rayborn one. West of town. Five miles maybe.
GIL
Did you notice a connection?
ELENA
I noticed my house started falling apart at the same time they started
pumping wastewater underground. I'm not a scientist, but I can add
two and two.
Gil walks to the crack. Runs his finger along it. Gray grit crumbles
away - the same texture he noticed in the bank steps. He pinches some between his fingers, frowns.
GIL
What's this foundation sitting on?
ELENA
Whatever they poured it on. Fifty years ago. Why?
Gil doesn't answer. He takes out a small ziplock bag, scrapes some of
the grit into it.
GIL
When was the last tremor?
ELENA
Two nights ago. Rattled the windows.
GIL
Did you report it?
ELENA
Report it to who? Nobody cares about a 2.8.
GIL 2.8?
ELENA
That's what the app said. I have one of those earthquake apps.
Gil pulls out his phone. Opens a USGS app. Scrolls.
GIL
March 14. Magnitude 2.8. Five miles southwest of Aguaverde.
ELENA
That's the one.
GIL
There was another one on March 8. Magnitude 2.3.
ELENA
I remember that one too.
GIL
And March 2. Magnitude 2.1.
ELENA
Smaller. I didn't feel that one as much.
Gil looks at his phone. Something in his expression changes.
GIL
(almost to himself)
March 2. March 8. March 14.
ELENA
What about them?
Gil hesitates.
GIL
The intervals. March 2 to March 8 is six days. March 8 to March 14 is
six days.
ELENA
So they're regular?
GIL
Maybe.
He scrolls further back.
GIL
(CONT'D)
February 25. Magnitude 2.0. That's five days before March 2.
He keeps scrolling.
GIL
(CONT'D)
February 17. Magnitude 1.9. Eight days before February 25.
ELENA
Is that significant?
Gil looks at the screen. His face is unreadable.
GIL
I don't know yet.
He puts the phone away.
GIL
(CONT'D)
Mrs. Marsh. Can I show you something?
ELENA
Elena. And yes.
He takes out his binder. Flips to a page. A timeline he's been
building. Seismic events plotted on a graph.
GIL
These are all the recorded earthquakes within ten miles of Aguaverde
in the past year. Sixty-three events, most of them small. Under
magnitude 3.
ELENA
That's a lot.
GIL
Before 2018? Two or three a year.
ELENA
And now?
GIL
Sixty-three. In one year.
ELENA
(staring at the graph)
And nobody's investigating?
GIL
The state says the wells are operating within permit parameters. The
EPA says it's a state matter. The town says it's not our jurisdiction.
ELENA
So everybody points at everybody else.
GIL
That's how it works.
ELENA
Then how do we make it stop?
GIL
I don't know yet. But I'm going to find out.
Elena looks at him. At his binder. At his timeline.
ELENA
You're not like other politicians.
I'm not a politician. I got elected by accident.
ELENA
What are you then?
GIL
Persistent.
18. ELENA'S HOUSE - THE KITCHEN
INT. ELENA'S HOUSE --- KITCHEN --- DAY
Elena pours coffee. Sets a cup in front of Gil.
He opens his binder to a new section. Pulls out a folder.
GIL
Can I show you something?
ELENA
Show me.
He opens the folder. Inside: government forms. Old. Creased. Stamped in
red: DENIED.
GIL
This was my mother's RECA claim. Radiation Exposure Compensation Act.
She filed it in 1998.
Elena looks at the form.
ELENA
What's RECA?
GIL
Federal program. Compensation for people exposed to radiation from
nuclear testing. Downwinders. Uranium miners. Test site workers.
ELENA
Your mother was exposed?
GIL
She grew up in Carrizozo. Forty miles from Trinity. She was eight
years old when they detonated the first atomic bomb. Nobody warned
them. Nobody evacuated them. The fallout drifted over their town and
they didn't know what it was.
ELENA
What happened to her?
GIL
Thyroid cancer. Diagnosed in 1995. She filed her first claim in
1998.
He pulls out a document. Stamped: DENIED - INSUFFICIENT DOCUMENTATION.
GIL (CONT'D)
Denied.
Another document. Same stamp.
GIL (CONT'D)
2000. DENIED.
Another.
GIL (CONT'D)
2002. DENIED.
Another.
GIL (CONT'D)
2004. FOURTH DENIAL. SHE DIED THREE MONTHS LATER. STILL WAITING FOR
the appeal.
He spreads the four denial letters on the table. Four documents. Four stamps.
GIL (CONT'D)
The case number was 1638.
Elena looks at him.
GIL (CONT'D)
After she died, I started seeing that number everywhere. In government
documents. In permit applications. In financial records. I know how
that sounds.
ELENA
Are you crazy?
GIL
Maybe. Or maybe once you start paying attention, you see things other
people miss.
ELENA
Like what?
GIL
Like the drainage invoice for Oak Street was exactly \$16,380. Like
the permit number for the nearest injection well is 2024-1638. Like
you live at 1638 Oak Street.
He stops. Something crosses his face.
ELENA
Is that connected?
GIL
I don't know. The numbers are there. I don't know what they mean.
He gathers the denial letters. Returns them to the folder.
GIL (CONT'D)
Four times she proved she was sick. Four times they said it wasn't
enough.
ELENA
That's not a number. That's cruelty.
Silence.
ELENA (CONT'D)
My mother-in-law was from Tularosa.
Gil goes still.
ELENA (CONT'D)
She never talked about it. But I know she was there when it happened.
The fallout. The ash. She used to say it looked like snow.
GIL
Downwinder.
ELENA
She filed claims too. Same answer.
GIL
How many times?
ELENA
At least three. She died in 2008. Lung cancer. Never smoked. Never got
a dime.
Silence.
ELENA (CONT'D)
What do you need from me?
GIL
Documentation. Every time your water's brown, photograph it. Date and
time. Every complaint you file, keep a copy. Every phone call, write
down who you talked to and what they said.
ELENA
And then?
GIL
Then we build a paper trail. So when someone finally asks questions,
the answers are on the record.
ELENA
My mother-in-law would have liked you.
GIL
My mother would have liked you.
19. GIL'S TRAILER - THE PATTERN
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- EVENING
Gil stands before the wall.
He's adding new materials. The photographs from Elena's basement. The timeline of earthquakes. A map of Oak Street with dots marking each damaged house.
And something else.
He's written the earthquake dates on index cards. Calculated the intervals between them.
FEB 17 → FEB 25: 8 DAYS FEB 25 → MAR 2: 5 DAYS (= 6 - 1) MAR 2 → MAR 8: 6 DAYS MAR 8 → MAR 14: 6 DAYS (= 3 + 3)
He steps back. Stares.
GIL
(to himself)
Eight. Five. Six. Six.
He writes another card:
8 - 1 - 6 - 3 - 8 OR 1 - 8 - 5(6-1) - 6 - 6(3+3)
He pins it to the wall.
GIL
(CONT'D)
Not clean. Not obvious.
He crosses it out.
Writes:
MAYBE
NOT THE PATTERN. MAYBE JUST EARTHQUAKES.
Pins it.
Stares.
GIL (CONT'D) (to himself) Stay boring. Win by being boring. Forty-three votes and a binder.
His phone buzzes.
Text from Elena: Meeting starts at 7. 1638 Oak Street.
Gil freezes.
He reads the message again.
1638 Oak Street.
He types: What's your address?
Elena: 1638 Oak Street. The blue house with the porch swing.
Gil stares at the phone.
Looks at the wall. At his mother's denial letter. Case #1638.
Looks at the phone.
1638 Oak Street.
He pulls out the index card from his pocket. The one that says: DON'T
MENTION
THE PATTERN.
Puts it back in his pocket.
20. THE NEIGHBORHOOD MEETING
INT. ELENA'S HOUSE --- LIVING ROOM --- NIGHT
The house number is visible from inside: 1638, stenciled on the mail slot.
Eighteen people. Folding chairs. The brown water jug from Elena's tap sits on the coffee table like an accusation.
Gil stands at the front of the room, binder open.
GIL
My name is Gil Padilla. I'm the new mayor.
GIL (CONT'D)
Most of you don't know me. Some of you know my podcast. If you
listened to it, you probably think I'm crazy.
Nobody denies it.
GIL (CONT'D)
Maybe I am. But I'm also the only person in town government who's
asked why your water is brown and your basements are flooding and
nobody's doing anything about it.
The room shifts.
GIL (CONT'D)
In the past year, there have been sixty-three recorded seismic events
within ten miles of Aguaverde. Before the injection wells opened, we
averaged two or three a year.
He holds up a map.
GIL (CONT'D)
Fourteen households on this street have reported water quality issues
or foundation damage. The town says it's your plumbing. The utility
says it's your problem. The state says it's not their jurisdiction.
MAN IN BACK (RICK SALAZAR)
My brother works for Rayborn.
Silence.
RICK
He's been there eight years. Feeds his family. Pays his mortgage.
Good job. Good benefits.
GIL
I'm not here to attack Rayborn.
RICK
Then what are you here for?
GIL
Elena's water is brown. Her foundation is cracked. Nobody will tell
her why.
RICK
And you think it's the wells.
GIL
I think it might be connected. I don't know for certain. That's why
I'm asking questions.
RICK
And if the questions hurt people? People like my brother?
GIL
Then we deal with that when we get there. But right now, the people
being hurt are in this room.
Rick studies him.
RICK
My basement flooded in March.
GIL
Tell me.
RICK
Sump pump couldn't keep up. Three inches of water. Ruined everything
in storage.
GIL
When exactly?
RICK
March 14. The night of the big tremor.
GIL
The 2.8.
RICK
Yeah.
Gil makes a note.
GIL
Anyone else have damage from that night?
Hands go up. Six. Eight. Eleven.
GIL (CONT'D)
Did anyone file reports?
Hands drop. Three stay up.
GIL (CONT'D)
What happened when you filed?
WOMAN
Nothing. They said they'd look into it.
MAN
Same. I called three times. "Natural settling."
ANOTHER WOMAN
My insurance said earthquakes aren't covered unless you have a
special rider. Which nobody told me I needed.
Gil writes all of it down.
GIL
Here's what I'm going to do. I'm going to file records requests
with the town. Correspondence with Rayborn. Payment records. Permits.
Everything.
RICK
And if they don't give them to you?
GIL
Then I'll go to the state. And if the state doesn't listen, I'll go
to the press. And if the press doesn't care, I'll go back to my
podcast.
VOICE
The crazy podcast?
GIL
The thorough podcast. Nobody takes me seriously anyway. Might as well
use that.
He looks around the room.
GIL (CONT'D)
I'm not promising anything. I'm a binder and a headache. But you
elected me to ask questions. So I'm asking.
ELENA
What do you need from us?
GIL
Documentation. Every problem you've had - water, flooding, foundation
damage - write it down. Dates, times, who you called, what they said.
Take photos. Keep records.
RICK
And then?
GIL
Then we build a case. Not a court case. A paper case. Enough
documentation that when someone finally looks at this, they can't say
there's no evidence.
WOMAN
Will that work?
GIL
I don't know. My mother tried for fifteen years. Documented
everything. Every doctor's visit, every test result, every denial
letter. She died waiting.
Silence.
GIL (CONT'D)
But her documentation is still there. Her case is still on record. And
someday someone's going to look at that record and see what happened.
He looks at Elena's jug of brown water.
GIL (CONT'D)
I'm not asking you to fight a war. I'm asking you to keep receipts.
21. AFTER THE MEETING
EXT. ELENA'S HOUSE --- PORCH --- NIGHT
The meeting has ended. Most people have left.
Gil stands on the porch, looking at the house number: 1638.
Elena comes out.
ELENA
You keep staring at my address.
GIL
I know.
ELENA
It means something to you. The number.
GIL
It was my mother's case number. Her RECA claim.
ELENA
Oh.
GIL
I see it everywhere. That probably makes me crazy.
ELENA
Or it makes you paying attention.
GIL
Most people think it's the first thing.
ELENA
Most people don't have brown water and cracked foundations.
Gil turns to face her.
GIL
Mrs. Marsh -
ELENA
Elena.
GIL
Elena. I want to be honest with you. I notice patterns. I can't help
it. It's how my brain works. And sometimes the patterns are real and
sometimes I'm just seeing what I want to see. I can't always tell
the difference.
ELENA
What are you trying to tell me?
GIL
I'm trying to tell you that I might be the wrong person to help you.
I have... baggage. History. A reputation.
ELENA
You're the only person who's listened.
GIL
That's not a high bar.
ELENA
In this town, it's the only bar.
Rick Salazar appears on the porch. He's been waiting. Smoking.
RICK
Mayor.
GIL
Rick.
RICK
Can I talk to you for a minute?
GIL
Of course.
Rick glances at Elena. She nods and goes inside.
RICK
I meant what I said. About my brother.
GIL
I know.
RICK
He's not a bad guy. He just needs the paycheck.
GIL
I understand.
RICK
But.
GIL
But?
RICK
He talks, sometimes. After a few beers. About things at work that
don't add up.
GIL
What kind of things?
RICK
Pressure readings that seem wrong. Disposal volumes that keep going
up. Equipment that's supposed to be monitored but isn't.
GIL
Has he reported it?
RICK
To who? The company? They'd fire him. The state? They don't care.
GIL
Would he talk to me?
RICK
No. He doesn't even know I'm here.
GIL
Then why are you telling me this?
RICK
Because something's wrong. I don't know what. But my basement
flooded and my wife is afraid to drink the water and my brother comes
home looking like he's seen something he wishes he hadn't.
He takes a drag.
RICK
(CONT'D)
You want to find the truth? Fine. But leave my brother out of it.
GIL
I can't promise that. If I find something that leads to Rayborn -
RICK
Then you be careful how you find it. Because there are a lot of
families in this town depending on those jobs.
GIL
And there are families in this town whose houses are falling apart.
RICK
Yeah. I know. That's the problem.
He finishes his cigarette. Drops it. Steps on it.
RICK
(CONT'D)
My brother mentioned a name once. Guy who asked too many questions.
Got transferred to West Texas. Middle of nowhere. His wife left him
within six months.
GIL
What was his name?
RICK
I don't know. But I can find out.
GIL
I'd appreciate that.
RICK
And if I do - you didn't get it from me.
GIL
I understand.
RICK
No. You don't.
He walks to his truck.
RICK
(CONT'D)
But you will.
He drives away.
Gil stands on the porch.
Looks at the house number.
1638.
22. THE TREMOR
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- NIGHT
Gil at his desk, organizing notes from the meeting.
His phone buzzes. USGS EARTHQUAKE ALERT.
MAGNITUDE 3.4 - 5 MILES SW OF AGUAVERDE
The trailer shakes.
Not violently. But more than before. Books rattle on shelves. The photograph of his mother slides across the desk.
He catches it.
The shaking stops.
Gil sits still.
His phone buzzes.
Elena: Did you feel that?
Gil: Yeah. 3.4.
Elena: My grandmother lived in this house for sixty years. She never felt an earthquake. Not once.
Gil stares at the message.
Types: When did they start?
Elena: Three years ago. When they opened the new injection site.
Elena: It wasn't like this before.
He looks at his timeline. The earthquake dates. The well permits.
Types: I'm going to find out why.
He puts down the phone.
Looks at the framed denial letter. Case #1638.
GIL
(to his mother)
Something's wrong here. Something that wasn't wrong before.
He writes on an index card:
8 - 5 - 6 - 6 - 6
Stares at it.
GIL (CONT'D)
(to himself)
Not the pattern. Just... numbers.
He pins it to the wall anyway.
23. THE COUNCIL MEETING
INT. TOWN COUNCIL CHAMBER --- NIGHT
Three days later.
The room is full. Word has spread. Something might happen.
Wade sits at the center of the dais. The council members flank him. Sandra at the staff table.
In the audience: Elena, front row, holding her jug of brown water. Rick Salazar, near the back. Dolores, knitting.
And reporters. Three of them. The 3.4 made the regional news.
Wade bangs the gavel.
WADE
The regular meeting of the Aguaverde Town Council is called to order.
The meeting proceeds: roll call, minutes, routine business.
Then:
WADE
(CONT'D)
We now move to new business. Mayor Padilla has submitted two agenda
items. Mayor, you have the floor.
Gil stands.
GIL
Thank you, Mr. President. My first item is a resolution requesting
water quality testing data from the New Mexico Environment Department.
Specifically, any testing conducted within ten miles of Aguaverde
related to groundwater or surface water that may have been affected by
injection well operations.
WADE
Discussion?
COUNCIL MEMBER HOLT
What prompted this request?
GIL
Fourteen households on Oak Street have reported brown water and
foundation damage in the past year. The timing coincides with -
He pauses. Almost says something.
Sandra, at the staff table, coughs. Lightly.
Gil glances at her.
GIL (CONT'D) - with increased activity in the area.
COUNCIL MEMBER MORALES
Is there evidence of a connection?
GIL
That's what testing would tell us.
WADE
The state has jurisdiction over injection wells. This is outside our
authority.
GIL
I'm not requesting authority. I'm requesting information.
WADE
And if the state declines to provide it?
GIL
Then at least we'll have asked. On the record.
WADE
Further discussion?
Silence.
WADE
(CONT'D)
All in favor?
Four hands go up.
WADE
(CONT'D)
Opposed?
Wade raises his hand alone.
WADE
(CONT'D)
Motion carries. Four to one.
He doesn't hide his displeasure.
WADE
(CONT'D)
Your second item, Mayor.
GIL
A request for access to executive session minutes from 2020 to
present.
The room stirs.
WADE
Executive sessions are confidential.
GIL
Section 8.4 of the charter allows release by majority vote of the
council.
WADE
For what purpose?
GIL
To understand what decisions have been made in closed session
regarding Rayborn Energy, Oak Street infrastructure, and related
matters.
WADE
You're implying that something improper occurred.
GIL
I'm implying nothing. I'm requesting information.
WADE
Executive sessions exist to protect sensitive deliberations.
GIL
And public accountability exists to ensure those deliberations serve
the public interest.
WADE
Is there a specific executive session you're concerned about?
GIL
I don't know. That's why I'm requesting the minutes.
WADE
This is a fishing expedition.
It's a records request. From the mayor. About matters affecting this town. The least the public deserves is transparency.
WADE
Discussion?
COUNCIL MEMBER HOLT
Why now? You've been in office less than a week.
Because people on Oak Street have been waiting six months for help. Someone needed to make it their concern.
COUNCIL MEMBER MORALES
And you think the executive sessions have answers?
GIL
I think they might have context. What did the council discuss when the
injection wells were first proposed? What did they discuss when Oak
Street residents started complaining? What did they discuss when the
first tremors were reported?
WADE
The council discussed what councils always discuss. Policy. Procedure.
The appropriate response to constituent concerns.
GIL
Then there should be nothing to hide.
Silence.
WADE
All in favor of releasing executive session minutes?
Two hands go up.
WADE
(CONT'D)
Opposed?
Three hands, including Wade's.
WADE
(CONT'D)
Motion fails. Three to two.
Gil nods. He expected this.
GIL
For the record, I intend to file a formal request with the town
attorney. If that request is denied, I'll appeal to the state.
WADE
That's your prerogative.
GIL
I know.
They look at each other. Something passes between them. An
acknowledgment.
This is the beginning of something.
WADE
Is there any other new business?
GIL
Not tonight.
WADE
Then we're adjourned.
He bangs the gavel.
24. THE PARKING LOT
EXT. TOWN HALL --- PARKING LOT --- NIGHT
Gil walks to his truck.
WADE (O.S.)
Mayor Padilla.
Gil turns. Wade approaches.
WADE (CONT'D)
A word?
They stand in the parking lot. Long shadows from the town hall lights.
WADE (CONT'D)
You're good at this.
GIL
At what?
WADE
Making people uncomfortable.
GIL
Is something being hidden?
Wade doesn't answer directly.
WADE
You ever hear of the golden rule? The one about gold?
GIL
He who has the gold.
WADE
Rayborn has the gold. Has for thirty years.
GIL
And in exchange?
WADE
We don't ask too many questions.
GIL
That's worked for you.
WADE
For this town.
GIL
Tell that to Elena Marsh.
WADE
Elena Marsh is one person.
GIL
Elena Marsh is fourteen households. Maybe more.
Silence.
WADE
What do you want? Really.
GIL
(quiet) Case 1638. RECA. Denied four times.
WADE
What does that have to do with -
GIL
I don't know yet.
WADE
Your mother?
Wade studies him.
WADE
You're going to be a problem for me.
GIL
Good. That means I'm doing my job.
WADE
Your records request will be routed through counsel.
He turns. Walks away.
Gil stands alone.
25. THE SECOND BOX OF RECORDS
INT. TOWN HALL --- CLERK'S OFFICE --- DAY
Two weeks later.
Gil approaches Dolores's window. She's knitting. Always knitting.
GIL
My records request.
DOLORES
Which one?
GIL
Rayborn correspondence. Permits. Payments.
DOLORES
Fifteen business days.
GIL
It's been seventeen.
DOLORES
Has it?
She reaches under the counter. Pulls out a box.
I'm the mayor of a town that barely votes. You'd think that would make me easy to ignore.
DOLORES
You'd think.
Gil opens the box.
Half the pages are black. Redacted.
He holds one up. The entire page is black except for a date: 03/14/2022.
GIL
What is this?
DOLORES
That's what was provided.
GIL
I asked for correspondence. This is... ink.
DOLORES
Legal review determined certain portions were confidential.
GIL
The whole page?
DOLORES
Confidential portions.
GIL
Dolores.
DOLORES
Mayor.
They look at each other.
GIL
Is there anything in here I can actually read?
DOLORES
Page thirty-two.
Gil flips.
Page thirty-two: an invoice.
RAYBORN
ENVIRONMENTAL SERVICES DRAINAGE ASSESSMENT - OAK STREET
\$16,380.00
At the bottom: two signature lines.
PAYMENT
AUTHORIZATION: Wade's signature. WORK VERIFICATION: Blank.
GIL
The invoice.
DOLORES
What about it?
GIL
The amount. Sixteen thousand three hundred eighty dollars.
DOLORES
That's what it says.
GIL 1-6-3-8-0.
DOLORES
It's an invoice amount.
GIL
And this line. The verification line. It's blank.
Dolores's needles pause.
DOLORES
Is it?
GIL
Someone was supposed to verify the work was completed. Before payment
was authorized. Nobody signed.
DOLORES
That does seem like an oversight.
GIL
How many other invoices have blank verification lines?
DOLORES
I wouldn't know. I just stamp things.
GIL
But you've been here thirty-seven years. You've seen thousands of
invoices.
DOLORES
I've seen what I've seen.
GIL
And what have you seen?
Dolores sets down her knitting. For the first time, she looks at him
directly. Something in her eyes. Not warning. Not encouragement. Something more like recognition.
DOLORES
I've seen people come and go. I've seen questions asked and not
answered. I've seen paperwork filed and lost and found and lost
again. I've seen patterns.
GIL
What kind of patterns?
DOLORES
The kind nobody wants to see.
She picks up her knitting.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
You asked about the number. 1-6-3-8.
GIL
Yes.
DOLORES
The invoice amount. The permit number. Your mother's case.
GIL
Yes.
DOLORES
I don't know if it means anything. I've never looked for patterns.
That's not my job. My job is to stamp things and file things and
pretend I don't notice what I notice.
GIL
What have you noticed?
Long pause.
DOLORES
I've noticed that some numbers come up more than others. I've
noticed that certain invoices have certain amounts that don't round
the way invoices usually round. I've noticed that when certain
questions get asked, certain files become harder to find.
GIL
Are you telling me something?
DOLORES
I'm telling you what I've noticed. What you do with it is your
business.
GIL
Dolores -
DOLORES
Eighteen more pages in that box, Mayor. Not everything is redacted.
Gil looks at the box. Looks at her.
GIL
Thank you.
DOLORES
Don't thank me. I just stamp things.
Gil takes the box. Turns to leave.
At the bottom of the box, beneath the last document, he notices something.
A POST-IT NOTE. Yellow. Handwritten. Block letters.
WRONG
QUESTIONS.
He stares at it. Turns it over. Nothing.
He looks back at Dolores. She's knitting. Not looking at him.
He puts the note in his pocket and leaves.
26. GIL'S TRAILER - THE DISCOVERY
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- NIGHT
Gil sits at his desk. The box of records open. Papers spread across every surface.
He's sorting. Categorizing. Looking for patterns.
On the wall: new additions.
- The invoice: \$16,380. Circled. - The permit: #2024-1638. Circled. - The earthquake timeline. Intervals marked. - Elena's address: 1638 Oak Street. Circled. - The POST-IT: WRONG QUESTIONS.
He holds up a page. Another invoice. \$32,760.00.
He writes on a card: 32,760 ÷ 2 = 16,380.
Pins it to the wall.
Another invoice: \$81,900.00.
Card: 81,900 ÷ 5 = 16,380.
Pins it.
Another invoice. This one different: \$16,379.00.
Gil stops.
GIL
(to himself)
Sixteen three seventy-nine.
Off by one.
He stares at it. Writes on a card:
\$16,379 = \$16,380 - 1 TYPO? ERROR? OR SOMETHING ELSE?
Pins it to the wall. Frowns. It doesn't fit.
He sets it aside. Keeps sorting.
More invoices. More multiples.
GIL (CONT'D)
\$16,380. \$32,760. \$49,140. \$81,900. \$163,800.
He writes:
16,380 × 1 = 16,380 16,380 × 2 = 32,760 16,380 × 3 = 49,140 16,380 × 5 = 81,900 16,380 × 10 = 163,800
Pins it to the wall.
GIL (CONT'D)
All of them. All divisible by the same base number.
He stares.
GIL (CONT'D)
That's not coincidence. That's a unit price.
He looks at the framed denial letter.
GIL (CONT'D)
Case 1638.
He looks at his mother's photograph.
GIL (CONT'D)
What am I looking at, Mom?
The photograph doesn't answer.
Among the documents, he finds something else. An old permit application. Faded. A date stamp:
PROCEDURE
ESTABLISHED: 1958
He pauses. Looks at it.
GIL (CONT'D)
1958.
He pins it to the wall. Doesn't know what to do with it. A thread he
can't follow. The system is older than Rayborn. Older than the injection wells. Older than his mother's claim.
He sits down. Puts his head in his hands.
GIL (CONT'D)
Maybe I'm crazy. Maybe I'm finding what I want to find.
He looks up at the wall.
GIL (CONT'D)
Or maybe I'm right.
He picks up his phone. Types a text to Sandra:
I need to see all Rayborn invoices from the past five years. Not just the summaries. The originals.
Sends it.
He looks at the POST-IT.
WRONG
QUESTIONS.
GIL (CONT'D)
Wrong questions. What are the right ones?
He stares at the blank verification line on the invoice.
GIL (CONT'D)
The pattern. The number. That's what everyone expects me to chase.
That's how they'll dismiss me.
He stands. Walks to the wall.
GIL (CONT'D)
But the blank line. That's not pattern. That's procedure. That's a
signature that should be there and isn't.
He picks up a red marker. Writes across the top of the corkboard:
WHAT
AM I MISSING?
Below it:
THE
BLANK LINE.
27. THE 4.1
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- NIGHT
4:16 AM.
Gil is asleep at his desk. Head on his arms. The binder open beneath him.
The trailer starts to shake.
Not like before. This is different. This is sustained.
Five seconds. Ten seconds. Fifteen seconds.
Books fall from shelves. The coffee cup slides off the desk and shatters. The corkboard rattles against the wall - pins popping loose, papers fluttering to the floor.
Gil wakes. Grabs the desk. Holds on.
The shaking continues.
His mother's photograph slides across the desk. He catches it before it falls.
Twenty seconds.
The trailer groans. Something in the structure shifts. A crack appears in the ceiling - hairline, but visible.
Twenty-five seconds.
And then it stops.
Silence.
Gil sits in the dark, breathing hard. His mother's photograph in his hands.
His phone buzzes. USGS EARTHQUAKE ALERT.
MAGNITUDE 4.1 - 3 MILES SW OF AGUAVERDE
He stares at the number.
4.1.
His phone buzzes again. And again. And again. Text messages flooding in.
Elena: Are you okay?
Destiny: Gil? Gil?
Sandra: Emergency session. 8 AM. Be there.
Marlene: Biggest one yet. You feel that?
He doesn't answer any of them.
He looks at the wall. At the papers on the floor. At the pins that popped loose.
He gets up. Starts re-pinning. Methodically. One document at a time.
His hands are shaking.
Outside, he can hear sirens. Car alarms. Dogs barking.
He keeps pinning.
The equation is still there. Still unfinished.
1638 ÷ 43 =
He looks at it.
GIL
(to himself)
This isn't supposed to happen here. Not like this.
He picks up his phone. Types a reply to Elena:
I'm okay. You?
Elena: Foundation cracked. All the way through. I can see outside through my basement wall.
Gil closes his eyes.
Types: I'm coming.
Elena: No. Stay. We need you at that meeting.
He looks at the wall. At the pattern. At the evidence he's gathered.
Types: I'll be there. 8 AM.
Elena: Make them listen.
He puts down the phone.
Looks at his mother's photograph. The crack in the glass has spread. A new fracture, running from her face to the edge of the frame.
GIL
(to the photograph)
This isn't normal. This isn't supposed to happen.
He sets the photograph on the desk.
Looks at the ceiling crack. At the damage to his trailer. At the papers still scattered on the floor.
GIL (CONT'D)
Something is wrong with the ground beneath us.
He starts gathering the fallen documents.
Outside, the sirens continue.
The Martinez family's adobe - the one that's stood for eighty years - has partially collapsed. He'll learn this later. Right now, he's just gathering papers. Preparing for a meeting. Trying to make sense of numbers that won't add up.
The sun is starting to rise.
Gil works in the early light.
The wall watches him.
END OF ACT ONE
ACT TWO
28. EMERGENCY SESSION
INT. TOWN COUNCIL CHAMBER --- MORNING
8 AM. The room is fuller than it's ever been. The 4.1 made the news - not just local, regional. A camera crew from Albuquerque sets up in the back.
Gil sits at the far end of the dais. His binder is thicker than before. He looks like he hasn't slept.
Wade sits at the center, composed. Too composed. The composure of a man who's had practice.
Sandra at the staff table. She's drawn three boxes on her legal pad already. Dolores in the back, knitting. Watching.
In the audience: Elena, front row. Rick Salazar, middle. More Oak Street residents than before - word has spread.
Wade bangs the gavel.
WADE
This emergency session is called to order. We're here to discuss the
seismic event that occurred last night at approximately 4:16 AM.
Magnitude 4.1. The largest recorded earthquake in this area in over
twenty years.
GIL
4:16 and 38 seconds.
Wade looks at him.
WADE
I'm sorry?
GIL
The exact time. According to the USGS. 4:16:38 AM.
WADE
Is that relevant?
GIL
Probably not. I just notice things.
Wade holds his gaze a moment. Then continues.
WADE
I want to begin by assuring residents that town services are operating
normally. Public works has assessed critical infrastructure. No major
damage has been reported to municipal facilities.
VOICE FROM AUDIENCE
My chimney collapsed.
ANOTHER VOICE
My foundation cracked clean through.
ANOTHER
The water main on Elm Street is leaking.
Wade holds up a hand.
WADE
I understand there's been property damage. We're compiling reports.
Anyone with damage should contact the town clerk's office to file a
formal complaint.
ELENA
We've been filing complaints for a year.
WADE
Mrs. Marsh -
ELENA
Fourteen houses. Brown water. Cracked foundations. Nobody responds.
WADE
This isn't the forum for -
GIL
Point of order.
Wade's jaw tightens.
GIL (CONT'D)
Section 5.3 of the procedures manual. Emergency sessions allow public
comment on matters related to the emergency. Mrs. Marsh's concerns
are directly related.
WADE
The seismic event is the emergency. Prior complaints are a separate
matter.
GIL
Are they? The seismic event caused foundation damage. Mrs. Marsh has
been reporting foundation damage for a year. Either the issues are
connected or they're not. But she has a right to speak.
WADE
The council will hear public comment at the appropriate time -
GIL
The appropriate time is now. People's houses are falling apart. They
came here for answers. Are we going to give them answers or are we
going to hide behind procedure?
Silence.
WADE
You want to talk about procedure, Mayor?
GIL
I want to talk about accountability.
WADE
Accountability for what?
GIL
For this.
Gil opens his binder. Pulls out a document. Holds it up.
GIL (CONT'D)
This is an invoice. Rayborn Environmental Services. Drainage
assessment, Oak Street. \$16,380. Paid in full. March 2022.
WADE
I'm aware of that invoice.
GIL
Are you aware that the verification line is blank?
Silence.
GIL (CONT'D)
Someone authorized the payment. That's your signature, Council
President. But nobody verified that the work was actually done.
WADE
It was an oversight.
GIL
One oversight?
He pulls out another document.
GIL (CONT'D)
Another invoice. Same contractor. Same blank verification line.
\$32,760.
Another document.
GIL (CONT'D)
And another. \$49,140.
Another.
GIL (CONT'D)
And another. \$81,900.
He spreads them across the dais.
GIL (CONT'D)
Four invoices. Four blank verification lines. \$180,080 in payments
to Rayborn contractors with no confirmation that any work was
completed.
WADE
Those are legitimate invoices for legitimate services -
GIL
How do you know? Nobody verified them.
WADE
I saw the trucks. I saw the crews.
GIL
You saw activity. Did you see results?
WADE
That's not my job.
GIL
Whose job is it?
Wade doesn't answer.
COUNCIL MEMBER HOLT
This is highly irregular -
GIL
The blank lines are highly irregular. That we've paid Rayborn
contractors almost two hundred thousand dollars without a single
verification signature is highly irregular.
WADE
Pattern? What pattern?
GIL
(catching himself)
The pattern of... procedural failures. Repeated failures.
WADE
You said "pattern." You meant something else.
GIL
I meant that when the same mistake happens over and over, it stops
being a mistake.
WADE
What are you implying?
GIL
I'm asking questions. That's what forty-three people elected me to
do.
He turns to the audience.
GIL (CONT'D)
Here's what I know. Oak Street has been flooding for eighteen months.
Fourteen households have reported damage. The town paid for a drainage
assessment that nobody verified. The earthquakes are getting stronger.
And when I ask questions, I get told it's not our jurisdiction.
He turns back to Wade.
GIL (CONT'D)
So I'm making it our jurisdiction. I'm asking the council to
commission an independent audit of all Rayborn-related expenditures
for the past five years.
WADE
That's a significant undertaking -
GIL
It's a significant amount of money.
WADE
The cost alone -
GIL
The cost of doing nothing is fourteen houses with brown water. The
cost of doing nothing is a 4.1 earthquake at four in the morning.
WADE
I move to table this discussion -
COUNCIL MEMBER MORALES
I second the motion to... wait. I want to hear more.
WADE
The motion is to table -
COUNCIL MEMBER MORALES
I withdraw my second.
Silence.
WADE
Fine. Discussion.
GIL
All I'm asking for is an audit. An independent review. If there's
nothing to hide, the audit will show that.
COUNCIL MEMBER HOLT
What would this audit include?
GIL
All payments to Rayborn and affiliated contractors. All permits
issued. All inspection reports. All correspondence between the town
and Rayborn regarding Oak Street infrastructure.
WADE
And who would conduct this audit?
GIL
An independent firm. Selected by the full council. Not appointed by
any single member.
Wade looks at him. Long and hard.
WADE
All in favor of commissioning an independent audit?
Hands go up. Holt. Morales. The two who voted for the executive
session minutes.
Three to two. Wade opposed.
WADE (CONT'D)
Motion carries.
SANDRA
(quietly, to Gil)
An independent audit gives us subpoena power. Records Rayborn
wouldn't release voluntarily.
GIL
And if they find discrepancies?
SANDRA
Automatic referral to the state AG. It's not a town matter anymore.
Wade doesn't hide his anger.
WADE
Is there anything else, Mayor?
GIL
Not from me. But I believe Mrs. Marsh wanted to speak.
Elena stands. She's holding her jug of brown water.
ELENA
My name is Elena Marsh. I live at 1638 Oak Street.
Gil's expression flickers at the address. Nobody else notices.
ELENA (CONT'D)
This is my water.
She sets the jug on the edge of the dais.
ELENA (CONT'D)
Last night, the earthquake cracked my foundation from floor to
ceiling. I can see daylight through my basement wall. My insurance
says it's not covered. The town says it's not their jurisdiction.
She looks at Wade.
ELENA (CONT'D)
Why?
WADE
Mrs. Marsh, I understand your frustration -
ELENA
I'm not frustrated. I'm scared.
WADE
The town is doing everything in its power -
ELENA
No. They're hiding.
She picks up her jug.
ELENA (CONT'D)
The mayor showed up. That's more than anyone else did.
She sits down.
WADE
Is there any other public comment?
Three more people stand. Then five. Then eight.
They tell their stories. Brown water. Cracked foundations. Insurance
denials. Ignored complaints.
Gil writes everything down.
When the last person finishes, Wade bangs the gavel.
WADE (CONT'D)
This session is adjourned. The audit will be scheduled at the next
regular meeting.
People start to leave.
GIL
Council President.
Wade stops.
GIL (CONT'D)
Thank you.
WADE
For what?
GIL
For the vote. Even if you opposed it.
WADE
I opposed it because I know what you're doing.
GIL
What am I doing?
WADE
You're looking for something that isn't there.
GIL
Then the audit will prove you right.
Wade shakes his head.
WADE
You really believe it, don't you? The pattern. The numbers.
GIL
I believe in documentation. I believe in verification.
WADE
(quietly)
You're going to tear this town apart looking for a number.
GIL
I'm going to tear this town apart looking for a blank line. The
number is just how I noticed.
He walks away.
Wade watches him go.
29. THE AFTERMATH
INT. TOWN HALL --- HALLWAY --- CONTINUOUS
Gil walks out of the chamber. Sandra catches up.
SANDRA
That was something.
GIL
That was an audit request.
SANDRA
That was a declaration of war.
GIL
I asked for documentation.
SANDRA
You accused Wade of financial impropriety in front of a TV camera.
GIL
I pointed out that verification lines were blank. If that's an
accusation, it's an accusation of negligence, not corruption.
SANDRA
You think there's a difference?
GIL
There's a legal difference.
SANDRA
Wade won't see it that way.
Wade can see it however he wants.
Sandra stops walking.
SANDRA
Can I give you some advice?
GIL
Can I stop you?
SANDRA
The audit is going to take months. Independent firm, comprehensive
scope, political sensitivity - you're looking at six months minimum
before you see any findings.
GIL
I can wait.
SANDRA
Can the people on Oak Street?
GIL
What's your point?
SANDRA
My point is that the audit is the long game. You need something in the
short term. Something that shows progress. Something that gives people
hope.
GIL
Like what?
SANDRA
Like water testing. Independent testing. Not from the
utility - they've already said everything's fine. From an outside
lab. Something that can actually tell people what's in their water.
GIL
The council approved the request for state testing data.
SANDRA
The state will take three months to respond, and when they do, it'll
be a form letter saying their tests show no abnormalities. You need
your own data.
GIL
That costs money.
SANDRA
The mayor's discretionary fund. Section 4.7 of the budget. You have
\$5,000 for expenses that don't require council approval.
GIL
I didn't know about that.
SANDRA
Most mayors don't. They use it for community events. Pancake
breakfasts. Christmas decorations.
GIL
I'm not good at pancakes.
SANDRA
Then use it for water testing. Get samples from Oak Street. Send them
to a certified lab. When the results come back - and they will come
back, one way or another - you'll have evidence that nobody can deny.
GIL
Why are you helping me?
SANDRA
Because I've worked in this building for twelve years, and I've
watched Wade not ask questions for twelve years, and I'm tired of not
asking questions.
GIL
That's a dangerous thing to say out loud.
SANDRA
I'm the town manager. I'm supposed to be neutral. But neutral
doesn't mean blind. And I've seen enough blank verification lines to
know that something is wrong.
GIL
You've seen the pattern too.
SANDRA
I've seen the absences. The places where things should be and
aren't. That's not a pattern - that's a symptom.
GIL
Of what?
SANDRA
Of a system that stopped working a long time ago. Or maybe never
worked at all.
She hands him a folder.
SANDRA
(CONT'D)
Budget document. Section 4.7 is highlighted. The discretionary fund
requires a written justification but no approval. File the paperwork
and the money is yours.
GIL
Thank you.
SANDRA
Don't thank me. I'm not on your side.
GIL
Whose side are you on?
SANDRA
The town's. Whatever that means.
She walks away.
Gil looks at the folder.
30. DOLORES'S WARNING
INT. TOWN HALL --- CLERK'S OFFICE --- LATER
Gil approaches Dolores's window. She's knitting. The same project. It never seems to get any longer.
GIL
I have a budget request.
DOLORES
Section 4.7?
GIL
How did you know?
DOLORES
Sandra walked past my window ten minutes ago. She had that look.
GIL
What look?
DOLORES
The look of someone who just did something they can't take back.
She takes the form. Examines it.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
Water testing. Independent lab. \$4,800.
GIL
Is there a problem?
DOLORES
The form is complete. I'll process it today.
She stamps it. RECEIVED.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
You should have results in two weeks.
GIL
Thank you.
DOLORES
Mayor.
GIL
Yes?
DOLORES
The note in the box.
Gil goes still.
DOLORES (CONT'D) "Wrong questions."
GIL
You left that.
DOLORES
I stamp things. I don't leave notes.
GIL
Then who -
DOLORES
I don't know. But I noticed that the note appeared in a box that was
under my control, in a building where I know every lock and every key,
and I don't remember putting it there.
GIL
What are you saying?
DOLORES
I'm saying that someone is watching. Someone who has access that they
shouldn't have. Someone who knows what questions you're asking
before you ask them.
GIL
And the second note? The one in my trailer?
Dolores's needles stop.
DOLORES
What second note?
GIL "Right questions." With an invoice. \$163,800.
DOLORES
I don't know anything about that.
GIL
Then there are two of them. Two people leaving notes.
DOLORES
Or one person who can get into places they shouldn't.
GIL
That's not reassuring.
DOLORES
It wasn't meant to be.
She resumes knitting.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
You asked me once if I'd ever seen the number. 1-6-3-8.
GIL
You said you'd never looked.
DOLORES
I lied.
Gil waits.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
Thirty-seven years in this office. I've seen a lot of numbers come
through. Most of them don't mean anything. But some of them...
some of them come up more than they should.
GIL
The invoice amounts.
DOLORES
Not just invoices. Permits. Case numbers. File codes. Even addresses.
GIL
Elena Marsh lives at 1638 Oak Street.
DOLORES
I know.
GIL
Is that a coincidence?
DOLORES
I don't believe in coincidence. But I don't believe in what you
believe either.
GIL
What do I believe?
DOLORES
You believe the number means something. That it's a code or a
signature or a pattern with a purpose.
GIL
And you don't?
DOLORES
I believe it's there. I don't know why it's there. But I've
learned to notice when it appears, because when it appears, things get
complicated.
GIL
Complicated how?
DOLORES
People start asking questions. Files go missing. Procedures that
usually work stop working. It's like... like the number is a
marker. A flag. Something that says "pay attention here."
GIL
A warning?
DOLORES
Or an invitation. I've never been sure which.
GIL
Dolores. Do you know something you're not telling me?
Long pause.
DOLORES
I know a lot of things I'm not telling you. That's how I've
survived thirty-seven years in this office.
GIL
But?
DOLORES
But I'll tell you this. The number isn't the answer. The number is
how you find the answer. The answer is in the blank lines. The missing
signatures. The procedures that weren't followed.
GIL
That's what I said at the council meeting.
DOLORES
I know. I was listening.
GIL
Were you surprised?
DOLORES
I was... hopeful.
GIL
Hopeful?
DOLORES
That someone finally figured out the right approach. You don't prove
the pattern - you can't prove the pattern. But you can prove that
someone didn't sign a form. You can prove that money was spent
without verification. You can prove negligence. And negligence opens
doors that conspiracy closes.
GIL
Boring is where they hide.
DOLORES
Exactly.
She finishes a row. Starts another.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
There's something else. Something I noticed in the records before I
gave them to you.
GIL
What?
DOLORES
One of the invoices didn't match. \$16,379. One dollar off.
GIL
I saw that. I thought it was a typo.
DOLORES
Maybe. Or maybe it's not the same pattern.
GIL
What do you mean?
DOLORES
I mean that maybe there's more than one system at work here. More
than one... author.
GIL
Author?
DOLORES
(almost to herself)
Or maybe I'm as crazy as you are.
She looks at him directly.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
Be careful, Mayor. You're not just looking at numbers. You're
looking at something that's been here a long time. Something that doesn't like being seen.
GIL
That sounds like superstition.
DOLORES
It sounds like thirty-seven years of paying attention.
She goes back to her knitting.
DOLORES
(CONT'D)
Your budget request will be processed by end of business. Is there
anything else?
GIL
Yes. The election results.
Dolores's needles pause. Almost imperceptibly.
DOLORES
What about them?
GIL
You said you process elections. Certifications. Ballots. Counts.
DOLORES
I did.
GIL
How does that work? The counting.
DOLORES
Paper ballots. Hand-counted. Two poll workers plus a supervisor.
Standard procedure.
GIL
And after the count?
DOLORES
The ballots go in a box. The box goes in my cabinet. Nobody checks it unless there's a recount.
GIL
How often is there a recount?
DOLORES
In thirty-two years? Never. Nobody cares enough.
GIL
And the certification?
DOLORES
The count is recorded, reviewed, and certified by the town clerk.
GIL
That's you.
DOLORES
That's me. I write the number. I stamp the paper. Nobody double-checks.
GIL
So you certified my election. Forty-three votes.
DOLORES
I certified the official count.
GIL
Which was forty-three.
DOLORES
Which is what the official record shows.
Something in her tone. Gil catches it.
GIL
Is the official record accurate?
Long silence.
DOLORES
The official record is what I stamped. I just stamp things, Mayor.
She doesn't look at him.
GIL
Dolores.
DOLORES
Window closes at four-thirty. You have a water test to commission.
She slides the glass panel shut.
Gil stands there for a moment. Then walks away.
Behind the glass, Dolores watches him go.
She looks down at her knitting. At the pattern emerging from her
needles. A pattern she didn't intend.
She unravels the last few rows and starts again.
31. TOMMY'S SECRET
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- NIGHT
Gil on the phone. Pacing. The wall behind him.
TOMMY (V.O.)
You the mayor? The one asking about Rayborn?
GIL
Who is this?
TOMMY (V.O.)
The pressure data. The disposal volumes. They're falsified.
GIL
How do you know?
TOMMY (V.O.)
Because I used to record them. Before they transferred me. Before they
took everything.
GIL
Can you prove it?
Silence.
TOMMY (V.O.)
There's a storage unit. Tucumcari. Unit 1638. I hid copies before they
cleaned me out.
GIL
What's the combination?
TOMMY (V.O.)
42-39-81.
Gil writes it down. Stares at it.
GIL
42 times 39 equals 1638.
TOMMY (V.O.)
You see it too.
Click. Dead line.
Gil looks at the numbers. Then grabs his keys.
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EXT. TUCUMCARI --- STORAGE FACILITY --- DAY
A row of metal units. Small. Anonymous. The kind of place where people store things they want to forget.
Gil parks. Gets out.
Unit 1638 is at the end of the row. Smaller than the others. A padlock on the door.
He enters the combination. 42-39-81.
The lock clicks open.
He lifts the door.
Inside: boxes. Filing boxes. A dozen of them, stacked neatly.
On top of the nearest box: a POST-IT NOTE. Yellow. Block letters.
YOU FOUND IT.
Same handwriting as before. Same block letters.
Gil opens the first box.
INT. STORAGE UNIT --- CONTINUOUS
Gil sits on the concrete floor, boxes open around him, papers spread everywhere.
What he's found:
Pressure logs. Columns of numbers showing injection well pressure readings. Handwritten notes in the margins: "Adjusted per management directive." "Original reading: 3,200 PSI. Reported: 2,800 PSI."
Volume records. Disposal quantities. The official records show the wells operating at 80% capacity. Tommy's records show 140%.
Emails. Printed copies. Internal communications. "Need to stay under the EPA threshold or we'll trigger an audit."
He photographs everything.
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32. THE EVIDENCE
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- NIGHT
Gil at his desk, surrounded by Tommy's documents.
He's organizing. Categorizing. Building a timeline.
On the wall: new additions.
PRESSURE
DATA - FALSIFIED VOLUME DATA - FALSIFIED INJECTION CAPACITY -
140% OF LEGAL LIMIT
On the desk: a thin construction folder that doesn't belong with oilfield logs. OAK STREET SUBDIVISION - PHASE I. MATERIAL REQUISITION:
FOUNDATION
FILL - 1,638 CUBIC YARDS. Supplier: RED MESA RECLAMATION
(RECLAIMED). A stamped note: NO TESTING REQUIRED.
Beside it, a folded government map on old letterhead. A plume diagram traced in pencil - fallout drift plotted along the base of a mountain range. A handwritten label: BASELINE WIND PATH.
He picks up his phone. Texts Elena:
Found something. Big. Need to talk.
Elena: Tomorrow morning?
Gil: Can you come to my place? I don't want to discuss this in public.
Elena: Address?
He hesitates. Then sends it.
A few minutes later, his phone buzzes again.
Destiny: Dad, are you okay? I heard about the council meeting.
Gil stares at the message.
Types: I'm fine. How are you?
Destiny: Worried about you.
Don't be. What's the worst that can happen?
Destiny: That's not funny.
Gil: I wasn't joking.
Pause.
Destiny: Can we talk? Really talk?
Gil looks at the documents surrounding him. At the wall. At the evidence
of falsification and cover-up.
Types: Soon. I promise. But not tonight. Tonight I'm working.
Destiny: You're always working.
Gil: I know. I'm sorry.
Destiny: You're always sorry too.
She's right. He is always sorry. It doesn't change anything.
He puts down the phone.
Picks up the photograph. The one with the impossible date.
June 16, 2038.
"The first fault line."
He studies the date stamp. The format is wrong - it doesn't match any
government dating system he's seen. The font is off. Like someone created this to be found.
GIL
(to himself)
Disinformation. Or a warning. Or a test.
He pins it to the wall anyway.
He doesn't know what it means. But someone wanted him to find it. That
makes it important.
33. THE REALITY TEST
INT. DESTINY'S APARTMENT --- NIGHT
Destiny at her kitchen table. Laptop open. Papers spread out - Gil's documents, photocopied.
She's doing what she does: procedure. Verification. The medical mind refusing to believe without evidence.
On her notepad:
CLAIMS TO VERIFY: - Pressure data falsified (need original EPA filings) - Disposal volumes exceeded (need permit limits) - Invoice amounts match 1638 pattern (need independent sample)
She's crossed off the first two. Checkmarks. Verified.
The third one is circled. Unresolved.
She stares at it.
Loretta jumps onto the table. Destiny pushes her off.
DESTINY
(to herself)
It's confirmation bias. He finds the number because he's looking for
it.
She opens her laptop. Pulls up the county permit database. Types:
RAYBORN ENVIRONMENTAL.
A list of permits. Dates. Amounts.
She scrolls. Looking for 1638. Looking for the pattern.
Nothing obvious.
She exhales. Relief.
Then stops.
Goes back to Gil's notes. His claim wasn't about permit amounts. It was about permit \*intervals\*.
She checks his handwriting: "Days between permit renewals follow the
sequence."
She doesn't believe it. She's going to prove it wrong.
She pulls up the dates. Types them into a spreadsheet.
First permit: March 3, 2019. Second permit: July 18, 2019.
Days between: 137.
Third permit: November 19, 2019.
Days between: 124.
Fourth permit: April 2, 2020.
Days between: 135.
She frowns. No pattern.
Then she sees Gil's note: "Add the intervals."
137 + 124 + 135 = 396.
She stares at it. 396. Not 1638.
She laughs. Quietly. With relief.
DESTINY
(to Loretta)
See? Nothing.
She starts to close the laptop.
Then stops.
Gil's note has one more line: "First four permits = baseline. Pattern emerges in deviation from baseline."
She doesn't want to keep going.
She keeps going.
Fifth permit: August 14, 2020.
Days from fourth permit: 134.
Baseline average: 132.
Deviation: +2.
She adds the next permit. And the next. And the next. Building a column
of deviations from baseline.
+2, -4, +6, +3, -8, +1, +6, +3, +8...
She stares at the numbers. They mean nothing.
Then she sees Gil's final note: "Sum the absolute deviations for permits 5-20."
She does the math.
2 + 4 + 6 + 3 + 8 + 1 + 6 + 3 + 8...
Her pen stops.
The sum is 38.
She checks it. Checks it again.
On the table next to her laptop: a glass of water. Half full.
She reaches for it.
Stops.
Looks at the glass.
The surface of the water is trembling. Barely. Concentric rings expanding from the center.
She didn't feel anything.
Loretta is frozen. Ears flat. Staring at the wall.
Destiny looks at her phone. Opens the USGS earthquake app.
A notification appears:
MINOR SEISMIC EVENT - MAGNITUDE 2.1 - TORRANCE COUNTY, NM - 16:38
UTC
She stares at the timestamp.
16:38.
The glass of water keeps trembling.
She doesn't drink it.
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34. DESTINY'S CONFESSION
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- DAY
Gil at his desk, surrounded by Tommy's documents. The wall behind him, rebuilt.
A knock at the door.
He opens it. Destiny. She's holding a folder.
GIL
I didn't expect -
DESTINY
Can I come in?
He steps aside. She enters. Looks at the wall. At the documents
everywhere.
DESTINY (CONT'D)
You're still doing this.
GIL
I found evidence. Real evidence. Falsified pressure data, disposal
volumes -
DESTINY
I know.
Gil stops.
GIL
What do you mean you know?
Destiny sets the folder on his desk. Opens it.
Inside: veterinary records. Lab results. A highlighted line: ELEVATED CREATININE. RECOMMEND FURTHER TESTING.
DESTINY
Loretta. My cat. She's had kidney problems for two years. The vet
couldn't explain it. She's an indoor cat. Eats premium food. No reason
for it.
She pulls out another document.
DESTINY (CONT'D)
Then I started asking around. My neighbor's dog. Same thing. The woman
downstairs? Her son has nosebleeds. Every week. No explanation.
GIL
Destiny -
DESTINY
I wasn't investigating FOR you, Dad. I was investigating AGAINST you.
She looks at him. Her eyes are wet.
DESTINY (CONT'D)
I wanted you to be crazy. I NEEDED you to be crazy. Because if you're
not crazy, then -
She stops. Looks at the wall. At the pattern.
DESTINY (CONT'D)
Then it's real. And if it's real, then I've been drinking that water.
I've been BREATHING that air. For three years.
GIL
I'm sorry.
DESTINY
Don't be sorry. Be right.
She looks at him.
DESTINY (CONT'D)
Are you right, Dad? About all of it?
Gil looks at the wall. At the evidence. At his daughter.
GIL
I don't know. I think so. But I've thought so before.
DESTINY
What's different this time?
GIL
This time I have documents. Not patterns. Documents. Things that can
be verified. Things that don't require you to believe me.
Destiny looks at the folder she brought.
DESTINY
What do you need?
GIL
I need someone who isn't me. Someone who can look at this and tell me
if I'm seeing what's there or seeing what I want to see.
DESTINY
Someone like me.
GIL
Someone exactly like you.
Destiny picks up a document. Starts reading.
DESTINY
Then show me. All of it. From the beginning.
Gil looks at her. At his daughter. Sitting in his trailer. Willing to
look.
He pulls up a chair.
GIL
It starts with a number.
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35. WADE'S DESPERATION
INT. WADE'S HOUSE --- KITCHEN --- NIGHT
Wade on the phone. Caroline is upstairs. He can hear her moving around, getting ready for bed.
WADE
(into phone, low)
The audit passed. Three to two... No, I couldn't stop it... He
had documentation. Invoices with blank verification lines. The council
couldn't ignore it.
He listens.
WADE
(CONT'D)
I understand the concern, but there's nothing I can do. The audit is
happening. An independent firm. We have no control over who they
select.
Longer pause.
WADE
(CONT'D)
I'm not saying that. I'm saying we need to be prepared. If they find
irregularities...
His voice drops even lower.
WADE
(CONT'D)
I know what's at stake. But I can't make this disappear. He's got
forty-three votes and a grudge and he's not going to stop until he
finds something.
He listens.
WADE
(CONT'D)
What do you mean, "handle it"?
His expression changes. Fear.
WADE
(CONT'D)
I'm not comfortable with... No. That's not... We're talking
about a mayor. An elected official. You can't just...
He stops.
WADE
(CONT'D)
I understand. I'll... I'll think about it.
He hangs up.
Stands in the kitchen. Breathing hard.
Caroline appears in the doorway.
CAROLINE
Who was that?
WADE
Work.
CAROLINE
It's midnight.
WADE
The earthquake. The council meeting. People are upset.
CAROLINE
You look scared.
WADE
I'm not scared.
CAROLINE
Wade.
WADE
I'm fine.
He's not fine. She can see it. He can see that she can see it.
CAROLINE
The prescription. I got it filled today.
WADE
I thought there was a problem with the authorization.
CAROLINE
There was. And then there wasn't. Someone made a call.
WADE
Who?
CAROLINE
I don't know. The pharmacy just said it was resolved. No co-pay. No
authorization needed. Full coverage.
WADE
That's... good.
CAROLINE
Is it?
WADE
Why wouldn't it be?
CAROLINE
Because nothing is free, Wade. Someone paid for this. Someone who
wants something from you.
WADE
You don't know that.
CAROLINE
I know you. I know that look. I know what it means when you can't
meet my eyes.
Long pause.
WADE
I'm trying to protect us.
CAROLINE
From what?
WADE
From... consequences.
CAROLINE
Whose consequences?
WADE
Everyone's.
She looks at him. The man she married. The man who's kept secrets for
so long that he's forgotten what truth feels like.
CAROLINE
I'm going to bed.
WADE
Caroline -
CAROLINE
Whatever you're doing, Wade. Whatever you've done. It's not worth
it. It's never been worth it.
She goes upstairs.
Wade stands alone.
He pulls out his phone. Looks at a contact labeled RAYBORN EXEC.
Doesn't call.
Puts the phone away.
Sits down at the kitchen table.
Puts his head in his hands.
36. THE WATER TEST
EXT. OAK STREET --- DAY
Gil goes door to door with Elena. A box of sample bottles. Labels. A clipboard. Evidence bags. And the old Geiger counter from his shelf - unexpected weight in his hands.
They collect water from each affected household. Fourteen samples. Fourteen brown jugs of liquid that should be clear.
At two of the worst houses, Elena leads him downstairs. A crack runs through the basement wall. Gil puts on a paper mask, scrapes a teaspoon of gray grit from the seam into a ziplock bag, and holds the Geiger counter close. A slow click. Then another.
At each house, the same story. The same frustration. The same fear.
HOMEOWNER 1 My kids won't drink it. They think it's poison.
HOMEOWNER 2 The utility says it's fine. You tell me - does this look fine to you?
HOMEOWNER 3 I've been boiling it for six months. Buying bottled water for drinking. Do you know how much that costs?
HOMEOWNER 4 My husband works for Rayborn. He's afraid to say anything. Afraid we'll lose the house.
HOMEOWNER 5 I don't know who to trust anymore. The town. The state. The company. Everyone's lying.
Gil writes everything down.
When they finish, Elena drives him to the shipping center.
ELENA
How long for results?
GIL
Two weeks.
ELENA
And then?
GIL
And then we'll know what's in the water. And we'll have proof that
nobody can deny.
ELENA
What do you think they'll find?
GIL
I don't know. But I know what I hope they don't find.
ELENA
What's that?
GIL
Radiation.
Elena looks at him sharply.
GIL
(CONT'D)
The injection wells are disposing of wastewater from oil and gas
operations. Some of that wastewater is naturally radioactive. If
they're exceeding their disposal limits - if they're pumping more
than the wells can handle - the radiation could be leaching into the
groundwater.
ELENA
Like your mother.
GIL
Not the same thing. But related. Same principle. Same pattern.
Contaminate the environment. Deny the victims. Delay until they give
up or die.
ELENA
But the Geiger counter clicked in my basement. Away from the water.
GIL
That's what worries me. The injection wells might not be the only source. When the ground shakes, it opens pathways. Fractures. And whatever's already in the fill - legacy material from before anyone was testing - that can migrate too.
ELENA
You're saying there might be two problems.
GIL
I'm saying the quakes might be connecting them.
ELENA
You really believe that.
GIL
I've seen it happen. Again and again. Different places. Different
poisons. Same system.
ELENA
And the number? 1-6-3-8?
GIL
I don't know. Maybe it means something. Maybe it's just... how I
notice. A way of seeing what's hidden in plain sight.
ELENA
You're not crazy.
GIL
How do you know?
ELENA
Because crazy people don't question whether they're crazy. They're
certain. You're the least certain person I've ever met.
GIL
That's not reassuring.
ELENA
It wasn't meant to be.
She smiles. Slightly.
ELENA
(CONT'D)
Thank you. For doing this. For listening. For showing up.
GIL
I got forty-three votes. Showing up is the least I can do.
ELENA
You say that a lot. Forty-three votes.
GIL
It's what I have. It's who I am.
ELENA
No. It's what you tell yourself. Who you are is more than that.
Gil doesn't answer.
He ships the samples. Two weeks until answers.
37. THE ANOMALY
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- NIGHT
Gil at the wall, organizing Tommy's documents.
He's found more anomalies. More numbers that don't quite fit.
An invoice for \$8,361. Half of \$16,722 - which is almost \$16,380, but not quite.
A permit numbered #2024-8361. The inversion of 1638.
A pressure reading logged at 08:36:01. Again, the inversion.
He writes on a card:
8361 ≠ 1638 INVERSION? SECOND PATTERN?
Pins it to the wall.
Stares.
GIL
(to himself)
There's something else. Something I'm not seeing.
He picks up the photograph. The one from the storage unit. June 16,
2038. "THE FIRST FAULT LINE."
He looks at the date again.
June 16, 2038.
6/16/38.
6-16-38.
61638.
He writes it down. Looks at it.
Not 1638. 61638.
Or: 6, 1638.
Or: 6 + 1638 = 1644.
Or: 6 × 1638 = 9828.
None of it makes sense.
He flips the photograph over. On the back, in pencil, barely visible: a
watermark. "AGUAVERDE COPY CENTER."
GIL
(to himself)
Someone made this. Locally. Recently.
Not a prophecy. A provocation. Someone wanted him to chase this number instead of looking at something else.
He puts down the photograph.
Looks at the wall.
All the patterns. All the numbers. All the connections.
And then: all the anomalies. The inversions. The near-misses.
GIL
(CONT'D)
Two patterns. Dolores said there might be two.
He writes on a card:
SYSTEM A: 1638 SYSTEM B: 8361? TWO SETS OF BOOKS?
Pins it to the wall.
Then looks at the card and laughs.
GIL
(CONT'D)
Two accounting systems. Two ways of hiding. Now I really sound like an auditor.
But he doesn't take it down.
38. MARLENE VALDEZ
INT. NEWSPAPER OFFICE --- DAY
A small office. The Aguaverde Gazette. Two desks, one occupied. MARLENE VALDEZ (40s) sits behind a computer, surrounded by coffee cups and notepads. She's been here twenty years. She's seen everything.
Gil enters.
MARLENE
Mayor Padilla.
GIL
Ms. Valdez.
MARLENE
Marlene. I've been expecting you.
GIL
Have you?
MARLENE
You're the most interesting thing that's happened in this town in
years. The podcast guy. The forty-three votes. The council meeting. Of
course I've been expecting you.
GIL
I have information.
MARLENE
I assumed.
GIL
And I need to get it published. Before the audit is complete. Before
someone tries to make it disappear.
MARLENE
What kind of information?
Gil opens his binder. Pulls out copies of Tommy's documents.
GIL
Falsified pressure data. Exceeding disposal limits. Internal memos
showing management knew.
Marlene takes the documents. Flips through them.
MARLENE
Where did you get these?
GIL
A source. Someone who used to work for Rayborn.
MARLENE
On the record?
GIL
Absolutely not.
MARLENE
Then I can't use them.
GIL
You can report that they exist. You can report that someone is making
allegations. You can file FOIA requests based on specific documents
and see what the company provides.
MARLENE
That's journalism 101.
GIL
I know. That's why I'm here.
Marlene looks at him. Appraising.
MARLENE
You listen to a lot of podcasts about how to take down corporations?
GIL
I made a lot of podcasts about how they took down my mother.
MARLENE
The RECA case. 1638.
GIL
You've done your research.
MARLENE
I told you - you're interesting.
She sets down the documents.
MARLENE
(CONT'D)
Here's the problem. Rayborn is the largest advertiser in this paper.
Has been for twenty years. If I run this story, I lose that
advertising. If I lose that advertising, I might lose the paper.
GIL
So you won't run it.
MARLENE
I didn't say that.
She looks at him.
MARLENE
(CONT'D)
I've watched Wade Sutter not ask questions for twelve years. I've
watched this town take Rayborn's money and look the other way. I've
watched people get sick and get ignored and get dismissed. And I've
kept my head down because I had a paper to run and a life to live.
GIL
And now?
MARLENE
Now there's a 4.1 earthquake and fourteen houses with brown water and
a mayor who actually seems to give a damn.
GIL
I got forty-three votes.
MARLENE
Yeah, I know. You mention it a lot. It's a good line.
Self-deprecating but with teeth.
GIL
It's not a line. It's the truth.
MARLENE
The truth is you're asking the questions nobody else will ask.
That's worth more than forty-three votes.
She picks up the documents again.
MARLENE
(CONT'D)
I'll need time. A week to verify what I can, file the FOIAs, build a
story that Rayborn's lawyers can't tear apart.
GIL
A week.
MARLENE
And you don't talk to anyone else. No other outlets. No social media.
This is my story until I publish.
GIL
Agreed.
MARLENE
And one more thing.
GIL
What?
MARLENE
The pattern stuff. The number. 1-6-3-8. Keep it out of my story.
GIL
Why?
MARLENE
Because it makes you sound crazy. Because it gives Rayborn's lawyers
a hook to dismiss everything else. "The conspiracy podcaster thinks a
number controls the government." You want this story to land, you
keep the numerology to yourself.
GIL
It's not numerology.
MARLENE
I know. But that's how it'll play. Trust me. I've been doing this a
long time.
Gil considers.
GIL
Fine. The story focuses on the procedural failures. The blank
verification lines. The falsified data. The exceeding of disposal
limits.
MARLENE
Exactly. Boring. Verifiable. Actionable. That's how you win.
GIL
Boring is where they hide.
MARLENE
Is that from your podcast?
GIL
It's something I'm learning.
She extends her hand.
MARLENE
One week, Mayor. Then we blow this up.
They shake.
39. DESTINY'S DISCOVERY
INT. AGUAVERDE COMMUNITY CLINIC --- DAY
Destiny at her station. Filing paperwork. The kind of mindless work that lets your thoughts wander.
She's thinking about her father. About the council meeting. About the news coverage that's starting to spread.
A colleague passes by - JANET, 50s, senior nurse.
JANET
Your dad's the mayor, right?
DESTINY
Unfortunately.
JANET
He's stirring up trouble with Rayborn.
DESTINY
He's asking questions.
JANET
Same thing, around here.
Destiny doesn't respond.
JANET
(CONT'D)
My sister works for them. Admin. She says people are nervous.
Management's been having a lot of closed-door meetings since the
council session.
DESTINY
That's not my business.
JANET
Your father made it everyone's business.
Destiny stands.
DESTINY
I need to file these.
She walks away. Into the records room.
Starts filing. Alphabetical. Mindless.
Then she stops.
She's looking at a folder. RAYBORN ENERGY - COMMUNITY HEALTH GRANT.
The folder that funds forty percent of this clinic.
She opens it.
Inside: grant documents. Payment records. Correspondence.
And an invoice.
RAYBORN
ENERGY FOUNDATION COMMUNITY HEALTH INITIATIVE - ANNUAL GRANT
\$163,800.00
Destiny stares at the number.
\$163,800.
She knows that number. Her father mentioned it. One of the invoices he
found.
She flips through more documents.
Another invoice: \$81,900.
Another: \$49,140.
Another: \$16,380.
All the same amounts her father has been tracking.
She sits down on the floor of the records room.
The clinic. Her clinic. Her salary. Her health insurance. All funded by the same money her father is investigating.
She's part of it. She's been part of it all along.
She pulls out her phone.
Starts to text her father.
Stops.
Puts the phone away.
She doesn't know what to do with this.
40. THE RESULTS
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- DAY
Two weeks later.
Gil opens an envelope from the lab. The water test results.
He reads.
His face goes pale.
ELEVATED
LEVELS OF: - Barium - Radium-226 - Radium-228 - Total
DISSOLVED SOLIDS - CHLORIDES - BROMIDES
A second page. Smaller print. An add-on Elena talked the lab into running: FOUNDATION DUST SAMPLE. A highlighted note: ELEVATED GAMMA ACTIVITY - CONSISTENT WITH OLDER CONTAMINATION. Gil stares at it, like the house itself just tested positive.
RECOMMENDATION: Water unsafe for drinking. Further testing recommended. Notify state environmental agency.
He reads it again.
Radium-226. Radium-228.
Radioactive isotopes.
The same isotopes that appear in oil and gas wastewater.
The same isotopes that have been linked to cancer in communities near disposal sites.
He picks up his phone. Calls Elena.
GIL
The results are back.
ELENA
(V.O.)
And?
GIL
You need to stop drinking the water. Everyone on Oak Street needs to
stop. Now.
Silence.
ELENA
(V.O.)
How bad?
GIL
Radioactive. Barium. Radium.
Silence.
ELENA
(V.O.)
Like your mother.
GIL
Yes.
ELENA
(V.O.)
What do we do?
GIL
We go public. Today.
41. THE PRESS CONFERENCE
EXT. TOWN HALL --- DAY
Steps of Town Hall. Microphones. Cameras from three stations.
Gil at the microphones. Elena beside him. Oak Street residents behind them.
Marlene's story broke this morning. Now Gil has something to add.
GIL
Good morning. I'm Gil Padilla. Mayor of Aguaverde.
He doesn't say '1638.' Not here. Not to them.
GIL
(CONT'D)
Two weeks ago, I commissioned independent water testing for fourteen
households on Oak Street.
He holds up the lab report.
GIL
(CONT'D)
Every sample showed elevated levels of radium-226, radium-228, and
barium. Radioactive contaminants.
GIL
(CONT'D)
And we submitted dust scraped from cracks in those foundations. That
came back elevated too. Not just in the water. In the houses. In what
they're built on.
Murmurs.
GIL
(CONT'D)
The people of Oak Street have been drinking radioactive water. For
months. Nobody tested. Nobody told them.
He sets down the report.
GIL
(CONT'D)
I'm calling on the state to conduct emergency testing. I'm calling
on the EPA to investigate. And I'm calling on Rayborn Energy to
suspend operations until the safety of our water can be verified.
REPORTER 1 Mayor Padilla, Rayborn denies any connection. How do you respond?
GIL
With data. Independent lab. Certified results.
REPORTER 2 Some have criticized your investigation as politically motivated.
GIL
I got forty-three votes in a special election nobody attended. I
don't have politics. I have documentation.
REPORTER 3 There are reports you believe in a conspiracy theory involving a four-digit number. Care to comment?
Sandra is standing to the side. She shifts her weight. Her hand moves
toward Gil's binder - not touching, just... present.
Gil sees it.
GIL
I believe in verification. I believe when someone says there's no
problem, you check for yourself.
REPORTER 3 But the number - 1638 - you've discussed it on your podcast -
GIL
Today I'm discussing radium in drinking water. That's the story.
He turns to Elena.
GIL
(CONT'D)
This is Elena Marsh. She's lived at Oak Street for thirty-four years.
She deserves to speak.
He steps back.
Elena steps forward. Holds up her jug of brown water.
ELENA
My name is Elena Marsh. This is what comes out of my tap.
She doesn't elaborate. She doesn't need to.
ELENA
(CONT'D)
The mayor showed up. He asked questions. That's more than anyone else
did.
She sets down the jug.
The cameras flash.
In the back: Wade, watching. A man in an expensive suit beside him. They whisper. They leave.
Gil sees them go.
His hand finds his binder. The number written on the first page, visible through the plastic.
He flips it to a blank page.
42. THE AFTERMATH
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- NIGHT
Gil's phone hasn't stopped buzzing. Calls from reporters. Calls from other mayors. Calls from environmental groups.
He ignores most of them.
He's at the wall. Looking at everything.
The invoices. The permits. The earthquake timeline. The water test results. Tommy's documents. The photograph with the impossible date.
And the anomalies. The inversions. The numbers that don't fit.
His phone buzzes again. Destiny.
He answers.
GIL
Hey.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
I saw the press conference.
GIL
And?
DESTINY
(V.O.)
You did good, Dad.
Gil is quiet for a moment.
GIL
Thank you.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
I mean it. I've been... I've been hard on you. About the pattern
stuff. The podcast. The obsession. But this - what you did
today - this mattered.
GIL
It's not over.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
I know. But you proved something. You showed that asking questions
matters. That documentation matters. That one person can -
GIL
Forty-three people.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
What?
GIL
Forty-three people elected me. It wasn't just me. It was everyone who
voted. Everyone who showed up at the council meeting. Everyone who
gave water samples. I'm just the one with the microphone.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
That's... very humble of you.
GIL
I don't feel humble. I feel scared.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
Why?
GIL
Because this is when it gets dangerous. This is when people start to
push back. This is when accidents happen.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
Dad -
GIL
I'm not being paranoid. I've seen it before. You ask questions, you
get transferred to West Texas. You keep asking, you lose everything.
Tommy Benavides. The name Rick gave me. He lost his job, his marriage,
his life. All because he told the truth.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
Is that what's going to happen to you?
GIL
I don't know. I hope not. But I need you to know... if something
happens to me -
DESTINY
(V.O.)
Dad, stop.
GIL
If something happens to me, the documentation is here. The wall. The
binder. Everything is labeled, organized, indexed. You can find it.
You can continue it.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
I don't want to continue it. I want you to be safe.
GIL
I'm trying. But I can't stop now. Not when we're this close.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
Close to what?
GIL
Close to the truth.
Long silence.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
Dad. I found something.
GIL
What?
DESTINY
(V.O.)
At the clinic. In the records. The Rayborn funding. The grants that
pay for our work. The amounts match. \$163,800. \$81,900.
\$16,380. All the same numbers you've been tracking.
Gil goes still.
GIL
They're everywhere.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
Yeah.
GIL
What are you going to do?
DESTINY
(V.O.)
I don't know. I work there, Dad. If I say something -
GIL
You don't have to say anything. You don't have to be part of this.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
I'm already part of it. I've been taking their money for three
years. Does that make me complicit?
GIL
No. It makes you an employee at a clinic that helps people. That's
not a crime.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
But taking money from a company that's poisoning people -
GIL
You didn't know. Nobody knew.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
You knew. Or you suspected.
GIL
I suspected. I didn't have proof until now.
DESTINY
(V.O.)
And now that you have proof?
GIL
Now I make sure it can't be buried.
43. THE CONFRONTATION
INT. TOWN HALL --- WADE'S OFFICE --- NIGHT
Wade alone. Late. The building is empty.
His phone rings. He looks at the caller ID. Grimaces. Answers.
WADE
Yes?
VOICE
(V.O.)
The press conference was unfortunate.
WADE
I couldn't stop it.
VOICE
(V.O.)
You didn't try.
WADE
What was I supposed to do? The lab results are public. The story is
out. There's no putting that back in the box.
VOICE
(V.O.)
The mayor is a problem.
WADE
The mayor is a symptom. The problem is that Rayborn exceeded its
disposal limits and contaminated the water supply.
VOICE
(V.O.)
Allegedly.
WADE
The lab results aren't allegations. They're facts.
VOICE
(V.O.)
Facts can be interpreted. Facts can be contextualized. Facts can be
challenged.
WADE
You're going to challenge independent lab results?
VOICE
(V.O.)
We're going to question the methodology. The sample collection. The
chain of custody. The mayor's political motivations.
WADE
That's not going to work.
VOICE
(V.O.)
It's worked before.
WADE
Not this time. The story is too big. The Albuquerque stations are
covering it. It's going national by tomorrow.
VOICE
(V.O.)
Then we need to contain it.
WADE
How?
VOICE
(V.O.)
The mayor's reputation. His podcast. The conspiracy theories.
There's plenty of material there.
WADE
He didn't mention the number today. He kept it to data and
documentation. He's smarter than he looks.
VOICE
(V.O.)
Then find something else.
WADE
There's nothing else.
VOICE
(V.O.)
Everyone has something. Find it.
The line goes dead.
Wade sits in the darkness.
He looks at the photo on his desk. Caroline. From years ago. Before the
cancer. Before everything.
He opens a drawer. Inside: a file. Old documents. An election
certification from last month.
He looks at the numbers.
Something occurs to him.
He picks up his phone. Calls Dolores.
WADE
It's Wade. I need to see the election records. From the special
election. The original count.
44. DOLORES'S CHOICE
INT. TOWN HALL --- CLERK'S OFFICE --- NIGHT
Dolores at her station. After hours. The building should be empty, but here she is.
Her phone rings. Wade.
She looks at the screen for a long moment.
Then answers.
DOLORES
Council President.
WADE
(V.O.)
I need to see the election records. The original count from the
special election.
DOLORES
It's after hours.
WADE
(V.O.)
I know what time it is.
DOLORES
The records are sealed until the certification period expires.
WADE
(V.O.)
I have authority -
DOLORES
Section 7.3. Sealed for thirty days post-certification. The
certification period ends next week.
WADE
(V.O.)
Dolores. I'm asking as a friend.
DOLORES
We're not friends, Council President. We're colleagues. And
colleagues follow procedures.
WADE
(V.O.)
There's something wrong with those numbers. Something that doesn't
add up.
DOLORES
The numbers add up to forty-three. That's what the record shows.
WADE
(V.O.)
Is that what actually happened?
Long silence.
DOLORES
I stamp things. I don't question them.
WADE
(V.O.)
You've been in that office for thirty-seven years. You know
everything that goes on in this building. If there's something wrong
with those numbers -
DOLORES
The numbers are what they are.
WADE
(V.O.)
That's not an answer.
DOLORES
It's the only one you're getting.
She hangs up.
Sits in the darkness.
Looks at the locked file cabinet where the election records are kept.
She has a key. She has all the keys.
She picks up her knitting.
The pattern emerging from her needles is wrong. She's made a mistake somewhere. The stitches don't line up.
She unravels the last few rows.
Starts again.
45. THE ESCALATION
EXT. OAK STREET --- DAY
Emergency response vehicles. State Environmental Agency vans. News trucks.
The press conference worked. The state is here.
Gil watches from the sidewalk as technicians in hazmat suits collect water samples. Official samples this time. Samples that will go into official records.
Elena stands beside him.
ELENA
You did this.
GIL
We did this. All forty-three of us.
ELENA
You keep saying that.
GIL
It's true.
ELENA
It's deflection.
GIL
Credit makes you a target.
ELENA
You're already a target.
She's right. He knows she's right.
A state official approaches. DR. SARAH CHEN (40s), from the Environment Department.
DR. CHEN
Mayor Padilla?
GIL
Yes.
DR. CHEN
Dr. Sarah Chen. State Environmental Division. I'm leading the
emergency assessment.
GIL
Thank you for coming.
DR. CHEN
We should have been here months ago.
GIL
What caused the delay?
DR. CHEN
The usual. Budget constraints. Complaints that don't rise to the
level of investigation.
GIL
Until they do.
DR. CHEN
Until they do.
She looks at the scene. The technicians. The cracked adobe walls.
DR. CHEN (CONT'D)
Your independent testing - the lab you used - it's solid. The results will hold up.
GIL
The question is source.
DR. CHEN
Right. We need to show a pathway.
She pulls out a tablet. Brings up a diagram. Shows it to Gil and Elena.
A cross-section: injection well at 8,000 feet. Aquifer at 200 feet. Between them: rock layers. And cutting through the rock: fractures. Old well bores. Dotted lines showing potential migration routes.
DR. CHEN (CONT'D)
Three potential pathways we've identified so far.
ELENA
Old wells?
DR. CHEN
From the fifties. Never properly sealed.
Elena studies the diagram.
ELENA
So the poison comes up through the cracks.
DR. CHEN
That's what we're testing.
GIL
The disposal volumes are falsified.
She looks at him sharply.
DR. CHEN
You have documentation?
GIL
Internal records. Rayborn exceeded their limits by as much as 60%.
DR. CHEN
Source?
GIL
Someone who used to work there. Won't testify.
DR. CHEN
Then it's hearsay. Useful for investigation, not prosecution.
GIL
Can you compare the official records to what the geology says they
should be producing?
DR. CHEN
We can try.
GIL
Then try. Please.
She nods.
DR. CHEN
We'll be here at least a week.
GIL
Thank you.
DR. CHEN
Don't thank me yet.
She walks back to her team.
Gil and Elena watch her go.
ELENA
The past coming up through the ground.
GIL
That's how it works.
He watches Dr. Chen.
Something about her manner. The institutional distance. The institutional tone. Always the same.
But something about the name stays with him.
46. WADE'S GAMBIT
INT. WADE'S HOUSE --- STUDY --- NIGHT
Wade at his desk. Documents spread before him.
He's been doing his own research. His own calculations.
He's found something.
1638 ÷ 43 = 38.093...
1638 = (38 × 43) + 4
A remainder. Four extra.
But if the vote count was different...
1638 ÷ 42 = 39
Clean. No remainder.
1638 = 39 × 42
He stares at the math.
If Gil got forty-two votes instead of forty-three, the number divides evenly into his mother's case number.
He would be inside the pattern. Part of it. Not investigating it - constituting it.
Wade picks up his phone. Calls a number.
WADE
I found something.
VOICE
(V.O.)
What?
WADE
The mayor's vote count. It might be wrong. Off by one.
VOICE
(V.O.)
How does that help us?
WADE
If we can prove the election was miscounted - if we can show that Gil
wasn't legitimately elected -
VOICE
(V.O.)
He got all the votes. There were only forty-three ballots.
WADE
But what if one of those ballots was invalid? Or miscounted? What if
the true number was forty-two?
VOICE
(V.O.)
That's a thin reed.
WADE
It's something. If we can challenge the election, delay his
authority, tie him up in legal proceedings -
VOICE
(V.O.)
Do you have proof?
WADE
Not yet. The records are sealed for another week. But someone changed
the count. Someone added a vote or miscounted a ballot. I know it.
VOICE
(V.O.)
How do you know?
WADE
Because the number. 1638. If you divide it by 43, you get a remainder.
But if you divide it by 42, it's clean. Someone protected him by
making his count inexact.
Long silence.
VOICE
(V.O.)
That sounds insane.
WADE
Maybe. But Gil believes in the number. He's built his whole
investigation around it. If we can show that his own election is part
of the pattern - that he's not outside it but inside it -
VOICE
(V.O.)
It would destroy his credibility.
WADE
It would destroy everything he's built.
VOICE
(V.O.)
Get me proof. Get me the election records. Then we'll talk.
The line goes dead.
Wade looks at the math on his desk.
1638 ÷ 42 = 39
He doesn't know if it means anything. But he's going to find out.
47. DOLORES'S CONFESSION
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- NIGHT
2 AM. A knock.
Gil opens the door. Dolores. No knitting. No smile.
DOLORES
Finish it.
GIL
What?
She enters. Sees the wall. Studies it.
DOLORES
The division. Finish it.
Gil reaches into his pocket. The card from Scene 1. Creased now. Worn at
the edges. He's been carrying it.
1638 ÷ 43 =
GIL
I don't -
DOLORES
Now.
Something in her voice. Gil finds a pen. Scrap paper.
He works the calculation. Longhand.
GIL
Forty-three into 163... three times. Remainder 34. Bring down the
8...
He writes. Crosses out. Writes again.
GIL (CONT'D)
Eight times. 344. Remainder...
He stops writing.
GIL (CONT'D)
Four.
Silence.
DOLORES
How many times did they deny her?
Gil doesn't answer. He's staring at the number.
DOLORES (CONT'D)
The count was forty-two.
GIL
What?
DOLORES
I added one.
DOLORES (CONT'D) Forty-two is an anecdote. Forty-three is a pattern
you can't dismiss.
DOLORES (CONT'D) They don't come for grief. They come for numbers.
DOLORES (CONT'D) Oak Street sits right on the baseline. The wind
takes what it takes - then we build on it and call it home.
Gil sits. Heavily.
GIL
You -
DOLORES
Do the other math.
His hands are shaking. He writes:
1638 ÷ 42 =
Works it.
GIL
Thirty-nine. Clean.
DOLORES
No remainder.
Long silence.
GIL
You committed a felony.
DOLORES
I wanted you to win.
She doesn't move. The line hangs there. A felony confession. A love
confession. Both.
Then she turns toward the door.
GIL
From what?
She doesn't answer. She's already leaving.
Gil stands alone.
He walks to the wall. Finds a clear space.
Pins the creased card.
Picks up the marker. Completes the equation - slowly. The r takes longest. Like it hurts.
1638 ÷ 43 = 38 r 4
He writes nothing beneath it.
He touches his mother's photograph.
His hand is shaking.
48. END OF ACT TWO - THE STORM (DOCTRINE CARDS)
HUMANIZED)
EXT. AGUAVERDE --- NIGHT
The sky is wrong.
Dark clouds building on the horizon. Monsoon season is early this year. The weather has been strange - everyone says so. The earthquakes. The contamination. The sense that something is shifting beneath the surface.
Gil stands outside his trailer, watching the storm approach.
His phone buzzes.
Elena: News says there's a big storm coming. You okay out there?
Gil: I'm fine. Stay safe.
Elena: You too.
He puts down the phone.
The wind is picking up. The first drops of rain.
Behind him, the wall is visible through the window. The pattern he's built. The evidence he's gathered. The questions he still can't answer.
He looks at the storm.
Thinks about his mother. About the fallout that looked like snow. About the claims denied and the truth deferred and the patterns that run through everything.
He thinks about the real number. Forty-two.
He thinks about what Dolores said. "I added one."
He thinks about what it means to be inside something you're trying to understand.
The rain starts in earnest.
He goes inside.
The trailer shakes slightly in the wind. The corkboard rattles.
His mother's photograph is still cracked. Still looking at him with that patient expression.
He sits down at his desk.
Picks up a pen.
Writes on a card:
42.
Stares at it.
Writes on another card:
r = 4
Pins them both to the wall. Next to the equation.
Writes on a third card:
What now?
Doesn't pin this one. Holds it.
The storm intensifies outside.
Lightning. Thunder. Rain pounding on the metal roof.
Gil sits in the noise.
He's scared. He admits it to himself.
Not of the storm. Not of Wade. Not even of the pattern.
Scared of what comes next. Scared of what he might find. Scared of what it means to be part of something you can't understand.
But he's not going to stop.
He picks up his phone.
Types a message to Destiny:
I love you. Whatever happens, I love you.
Sends it.
Types a message to Elena:
Stay strong. We're almost there.
Sends it.
Types a message to Marlene:
The election count was wrong. 42, not 43. Someone changed it.
Hesitates.
Doesn't send it.
Deletes it.
Some truths aren't ready yet.
The storm rages.
Gil looks at the card in his hand.
What now?
He pins it to the wall.
Looks at his mother's photograph.
GIL
(quietly)
Forty-two votes, Mom. Let's see if that's enough.
FADE OUT.
END OF ACT TWO
ACT THREE
49. THE MORNING AFTER
EXT. AGUAVERDE --- DAWN
The storm has passed. The town is battered but standing.
Trees down. Power lines hanging. Debris in the streets.
But it's quiet now. The kind of quiet that comes after something has broken.
Gil walks through town. Surveying the damage.
On Oak Street, the situation is worse.
EXT. OAK STREET --- MORNING
Several houses have visible damage. One has a tree through the roof. Another has a collapsed porch.
And Elena's house - 1638 Oak Street - has a new crack in the foundation. Wider than before. Running from the basement to the first floor.
Elena stands in her front yard, looking at it.
GIL
Elena.
She turns.
ELENA
It got worse.
GIL
I can see.
ELENA
The storm was just water and wind. But the house - it shook. During
the night. Like there was another earthquake.
GIL
There was.
ELENA
I didn't hear about it.
GIL
Small. 2.9. Just after midnight. The storm covered it.
ELENA
So it wasn't the rain.
GIL
It was both. The ground is destabilized. The water makes it worse. The
earthquakes make it worse. Everything makes everything worse.
ELENA
What am I supposed to do?
GIL
Document it. Photograph everything. File with the state. Add it to the
record.
ELENA
More documentation.
GIL
It's all we have.
She looks at him. Tired. Scared.
ELENA
Is it enough?
GIL
I don't know.
ELENA
You're supposed to say yes. You're supposed to be inspiring.
GIL
I got forty -
He stops.
GIL
(CONT'D)
I got... elected by people who wanted answers. I'm trying to find
them. But I can't promise they'll be the answers we want.
ELENA
What's wrong?
GIL
Nothing.
ELENA
You started to say "forty-three" and you stopped.
GIL
It's nothing.
ELENA
Gil.
He looks at her. At this woman who's trusted him. Who's followed him.
Who's put her faith in a man who got forty-three votes - or forty-two - and a binder.
GIL
The number might be wrong.
ELENA
What number?
GIL
The votes. Forty-three. It might have been forty-two.
ELENA
Does that matter?
GIL
I don't know. But it's... it's connected to the pattern. The
1638. IF THE VOTE COUNT WAS FORTY-TWO, THEN 1638 DIVIDES EVENLY INTO
IT.
Which means...
ELENA
Which means what?
GIL
I don't know. I don't know what any of it means.
ELENA
Then why are you telling me?
GIL
Because I'm tired of hiding things. Because you deserve to know the
truth. All of it. Even the parts that don't make sense.
Elena looks at him. Then at her cracked house. Then back at him.
ELENA
My mother-in-law used to say: the truth is like water. It finds a way
through.
GIL
Even through rock.
ELENA
Especially through rock. Given enough time.
GIL
We might not have enough time.
ELENA
Then we do what we can with the time we have.
She picks up her phone.
ELENA
(CONT'D)
I'm calling the other Oak Street families. We need to assess damage.
Coordinate our documentation. Make sure nobody falls through the
cracks.
GIL
That's a lot of work.
ELENA
It's what needs doing.
GIL
You're remarkable, you know that?
ELENA
I'm a woman who wants clean water and a house that doesn't fall
down. That's not remarkable. That's basic.
GIL
In this town, it's remarkable.
She almost smiles.
ELENA
Go do your job, Mayor. I'll handle things here.
Gil nods.
Walks back toward town.
50. THE CONFRONTATION
INT. TOWN HALL --- WADE'S OFFICE --- DAY
Wade is waiting.
He looks like he hasn't slept. His suit is rumpled. His eyes are red.
When Gil enters, Wade doesn't stand.
WADE
Close the door.
Gil closes it.
WADE (CONT'D)
I know about the count.
GIL
What count?
WADE
Don't. The election. Forty-two votes, not forty-three. Someone
changed it.
GIL
How did you -
WADE
I did the math. 1638 divided by 43 leaves a remainder. Divided by 42,
it's clean. Your whole obsession with the number - it should have
included your own election. It didn't. Which means someone hid it
from you.
GIL
And you think this matters because -
WADE
Because it proves you're not who you say you are. Not forty-three
votes. Forty-two.
GIL
A lie I didn't tell.
WADE
A lie you benefited from.
GIL
A single vote. You think that changes anything?
WADE
I think it changes how people see you. The conspiracy podcaster who
missed the conspiracy in his own election.
GIL
That's your play? Discredit me?
WADE
It's a start.
GIL
And the contamination? The radioactive water? Does discrediting me
make any of that go away?
WADE
It makes people question the source.
GIL
The message isn't from me. It's from an independent lab. From state
inspectors. From whistleblower documents.
WADE
Documents you obtained. Investigations you prompted.
GIL
And people are still drinking radioactive water.
Silence.
GIL (CONT'D)
You know, I thought this was about money. About Rayborn paying you to
look the other way. But it's not, is it?
Wade doesn't respond.
GIL (CONT'D)
Caroline. Her medication. The insurance problems that magically
resolved.
WADE
Leave Caroline out of this.
GIL
She's already in it. She's been in it for years.
Wade stands. Slowly.
WADE
You don't know anything about my wife.
GIL
I know you love her. I know you want to protect her.
WADE
Get out of my office.
GIL
I know the price of that protection is fourteen houses with brown
water.
WADE
Get out.
GIL
And people getting sick from contamination that you helped cover up.
WADE
I didn't cover up anything.
GIL
You signed the invoices. You blocked the investigations. You refused
the records requests.
Wade picks up his phone. Dials.
WADE
Security? I need someone removed from my office.
GIL
This isn't your office. It belongs to the people of Aguaverde. All
forty-two of the ones who elected me.
He walks out.
Wade stands alone.
He looks at the photo of Caroline on his desk.
His hand is shaking.
51. THE STATE REPORT
INT. TOWN COUNCIL CHAMBER --- DAY
One week later.
The room is packed. Standing room only. News cameras from four states.
Dr. Sarah Chen is at the podium. The state assessment is complete.
DR. CHEN
Our investigation confirms the findings of the independent testing commissioned by Mayor Padilla. Water samples from Oak Street and surrounding areas show elevated levels of radium-226, radium-228, barium, and other contaminants consistent with oil and gas wastewater.
Murmurs in the crowd.
DR. CHEN (CONT'D)
Geological analysis indicates a high probability that the contamination originates from the Rayborn injection well site approximately five miles southwest of the affected area. Pressure data and disposal volume records provided by the company do not match our independent measurements.
Louder murmurs.
DR. CHEN (CONT'D)
Based on these findings, the State Environment Division is recommending a comprehensive safety review of all Rayborn injection well sites in the region. Our report will be submitted to the commission for action.
REPORTER
Dr. Chen, what's the timeline for review?
DR. CHEN
Ninety to one hundred eighty days.
REPORTER
And in the meantime? Are the wells still operating?
DR. CHEN
That determination will be made by the commission based on our
recommendations. We've recommended suspension pending review, but the
final decision is not ours to make.
REPORTER
So the wells could continue operating?
DR. CHEN
That's a question for the commission.
The room erupts. Questions shouted. Cameras flashing.
Gil sits in the back. Watching.
Elena is beside him.
ELENA
(quietly)
That's it?
GIL
That's it.
ELENA
They're not shutting them down?
GIL
They're recommending. The commission decides.
ELENA
When?
GIL
Ninety to one hundred eighty days.
ELENA
And we keep drinking the water?
GIL
Alternative sources will be provided. That's in the report.
ELENA
Bottled water. While they decide.
GIL
While they decide.
Elena is quiet. Processing.
ELENA
You said documentation matters.
GIL
It does.
ELENA
This is documentation.
GIL
Yes.
ELENA
But it doesn't fix anything.
GIL
Not yet.
ELENA
Maybe not ever.
GIL
Maybe not.
She looks at him.
ELENA
Then what was the point?
GIL
The record. Someone had to make a record.
ELENA
What about the cracks? The foundations? That's not in their report.
GIL
The injection pressure destabilized the substrate. Once the fractures formed, whatever's in the fill had a pathway.
ELENA
A pathway to what?
GIL
The water table. And everything above it.
ELENA
(quiet)
The fill sand. From before the EPA existed.
GIL
From before Trinity.
Elena is silent. Processing the weight of it.
GIL
The point is it's on the record now. The contamination. The falsified
data. The pathway. All of it. Whatever happens next, that can't be
undone.
ELENA
Is that enough?
Gil looks at the podium. At Dr. Chen answering questions. At the
reporters and the cameras and the machinery of documentation.
GIL
It's what we have.
52. THE RESIGNATION
INT. TOWN HALL --- WADE'S OFFICE --- DAY
Wade at his desk. A prepared statement in front of him.
He hasn't delivered it yet.
A knock at the door.
Caroline enters.
CAROLINE
I heard about the state report.
WADE
Everyone has.
CAROLINE
It's over, isn't it?
WADE
Probably.
CAROLINE
What are you going to do?
Wade looks at the statement.
WADE
Step down. Before they remove me.
CAROLINE
And then?
WADE
I don't know.
Caroline sits down.
CAROLINE
I've been thinking. About what you said. About the choices you made.
For me.
WADE
Caroline -
CAROLINE
Let me finish.
He waits.
CAROLINE (CONT'D)
I've been sick for a long time. And you've been carrying that. The
cost. The fear. I've watched it change you.
WADE
I did what I had to do.
CAROLINE
Did you?
He doesn't answer.
CAROLINE (CONT'D)
Without the money, we would have been poor. We would have struggled.
But we would have been honest.
WADE
You don't know that.
CAROLINE
I know you. I know what you were. Before.
Silence.
WADE
I'm sorry.
CAROLINE
I know.
She stands.
CAROLINE (CONT'D)
Sign the statement. Tell them whatever you're going to tell them. But
don't put this on me. I never asked you to compromise yourself.
She leaves.
Wade looks at the statement.
Picks up a pen.
Signs.
53. THE PRESS CONFERENCE - WADE
EXT. TOWN HALL --- DAY
Wade at the microphones. Alone. No supporters. No allies.
The cameras are rolling.
WADE
Good afternoon. I'm announcing my resignation as Council President,
effective at the end of the month.
He pauses. Looks at his prepared statement.
WADE (CONT'D)
I want to thank the people of Aguaverde for twelve years of service.
I'm stepping down to focus on prior family matters during a difficult
time.
He folds the statement. Puts it in his pocket.
WADE (CONT'D)
I remain confident that the ongoing review will demonstrate that all
procedures were properly followed. I will not be taking questions.
He turns. Walks toward the door.
REPORTER
Mr. Sutter, are you facing criminal charges?
Wade stops. His hand on the door.
He turns back.
The reporters lean forward.
His mouth opens -
He's going to say something. Something true. You can see it forming behind his teeth. Twelve years of knowing. All of it pressing against his lips.
Then his eyes find something in the crowd: the Rayborn logo on a lanyard. A face he knows. A family he's protected.
His mouth closes.
He turns. Leaves.
REPORTER
Do you have a comment about Mayor Padilla's investigation?
He's gone.
The cameras hold on the empty podium.
In the back of the crowd, Marlene scribbles in her notebook.
MARLENE
(to herself)
That's the story.
54. THE CONFESSION
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- NIGHT
Gil alone. The wall behind him. The equation at the center:
1638 ÷ 43 = 38 REMAINDER 4
Headlines pinned around it:
"STATE RECOMMENDS SAFETY REVIEW - TIMELINE: 90-180 DAYS"
"COUNCIL PRESIDENT RESIGNS - CITES FAMILY MATTERS"
He's not looking at the headlines. He's looking at the photograph. Rosa. His mother. The cracked glass.
He takes the photograph down. Holds it.
GIL
I used to tell people you were paranoid.
He sits. The photograph in his lap.
GIL (CONT'D)
When you said the water tasted wrong. When you said you could feel it
in your bones. When you showed me the spots on your skin and asked if
I thought they were getting worse.
He touches the glass. The crack that runs through her face.
GIL (CONT'D)
I said you were imagining things. I said it was stress. I said -
His voice breaks.
GIL (CONT'D)
I said you were seeing patterns that weren't there.
He laughs. It's not a happy sound.
GIL (CONT'D)
And then you died. And I started seeing them everywhere.
He sets the photograph on the desk. Looks at it.
GIL (CONT'D)
Four claims. Four denials. "Insufficient documentation." You had
documentation, Mom. You had everything. You had thirty years of living
downwind and a body full of tumors and it wasn't enough.
He picks up the denial letter. Case #1638.
GIL (CONT'D)
They gave you a number. Filed you away. And when you died, the number
was still there. Exposed. No amount of investigation will make you
less dead.
He pins the photograph back to the wall.
GIL (CONT'D)
I didn't believe you. That's what I have to live with. My own mother
told me something was wrong and I told her she was crazy.
He touches the equation.
GIL (CONT'D)
Thirty-eight remainder four. The four was you. Your four denials. I
was carrying you in every number and I didn't even know.
He steps back.
GIL (CONT'D)
The report says 90 to 180 days. Then maybe something happens. Maybe
they do something. Maybe they don't.
He looks at the photograph.
GIL (CONT'D)
But you're not coming back. Whatever they find, whatever they do - it
won't bring you back. It won't make me right. It just makes me the son
who didn't listen until it was too late.
His phone buzzes. He ignores it.
GIL (CONT'D)
I'm sorry, Mom. For all of it. For not believing you. For making your
death about me.
He touches the cracked glass one more time.
GIL (CONT'D)
I hope it was worth it. I hope the math was worth something.
The phone buzzes again. He finally looks.
Destiny: I'm outside.
Gil looks at the photograph. At the wall. At the pattern he's spent
years building.
GIL (CONT'D)
(to Rosa)
She's here. Destiny. She looked at everything. She believes me.
He pauses.
GIL (CONT'D)
She shouldn't have to. That's what you'd say, isn't it? She
shouldn't
have to believe her father. She should just have clean water and a
government that tells the truth.
He walks toward the door.
GIL (CONT'D)
But she does believe me. And maybe that's enough. Maybe that's all any
of us get.
He opens the door.
CUT TO:
55. DESTINY'S ARRIVAL
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- LATER
A knock at the door.
Gil opens it. Destiny stands there. She looks tired. Worried. But present.
GIL
Hey.
DESTINY
Hey.
She comes in. Looks at the wall.
DESTINY (CONT'D)
It's bigger than I remembered.
GIL
It grew.
DESTINY
Like everything you do.
She sits down on the small couch. He sits next to her.
DESTINY (CONT'D)
I'm sorry. For doubting you. For being embarrassed.
GIL
You had every right to be embarrassed. I'm an embarrassing person.
DESTINY
You're a persistent person. There's a difference.
GIL
Not much of one.
She leans against him. The first physical contact they've had in
months.
DESTINY
I found something. At the clinic. The Rayborn funding. All the amounts
match the numbers you've been tracking.
GIL
I know. You told me.
DESTINY
I didn't tell you all of it.
She pulls out her phone. Shows him a photograph.
DESTINY (CONT'D)
This is the original grant application. From when the clinic first
applied for Rayborn funding. The amount requested was \$160,000.
GIL
And they gave you \$163,800.
DESTINY
Exactly. \$3,800 more than requested. Nobody questioned it. Free
money.
GIL
But it fits the pattern.
DESTINY
It fits the pattern.
Gil looks at the photograph. At the numbers.
GIL
They're everywhere. In everything. Every institution, every
transaction, every system.
DESTINY
What does it mean?
GIL
I don't know.
DESTINY
Does it have to mean something?
GIL
I used to think so. I used to think the pattern was a code. A
signature. Evidence of some hidden coordination.
DESTINY
And now?
GIL
Now I think maybe it's just... how the system works. Not a
conspiracy. Not a plan. Just the way institutions behave when they're
built on denial. The same structures repeating. The same forms. The
same numbers.
DESTINY
That's less dramatic.
GIL
That's more frightening. A conspiracy can be exposed. A system
just... continues.
DESTINY
So what do we do?
GIL
Document. Record. Try to change what we can. Accept what we can't.
DESTINY
That doesn't sound like you.
GIL
I got forty-two votes.
DESTINY
What?
GIL
The real count. Forty-two, not forty-three. Someone changed it.
DESTINY
Who?
GIL
Dolores. The clerk. She was trying to protect me. To make my number
inexact so the pattern wouldn't include me.
DESTINY
But it includes you anyway.
GIL
It always did. Mom's case number. The whole reason I started looking.
DESTINY
So you're inside what you're investigating.
GIL
I always was. I just didn't know it.
Destiny is quiet for a moment.
DESTINY
Does that change anything?
GIL
It changes how I see myself. But not how I see the truth.
DESTINY
And the truth is?
GIL
The water is contaminated. The data was falsified. The institutions
failed. People got hurt. And someone - many someones - chose not to
look.
DESTINY
But the injection wells are recent. The foundation damage on Oak
Street goes back decades.
GIL
I know.
DESTINY
So what's under the foundations?
Gil looks at the map on the wall. The baseline wind path. The pins.
GIL
Fill sand. Every foundation on Oak Street - every slab, every
crawlspace - they used fill sand from the settling ponds east of here.
The ponds they drained after Trinity.
DESTINY
After the test.
GIL
The wind carried fallout down the baseline for twenty years. It
settled in those ponds. They drained them in the sixties, sold the
sand as fill. Cheap. Nobody asked where it came from.
DESTINY
And they built on it.
GIL
Everything along the baseline. The school. The clinic. Oak Street.
He looks down at the floor.
GIL (CONT'D)
This trailer.
Destiny follows his gaze. The worn linoleum. The floor they're sitting
on.
DESTINY
We're on it right now.
GIL
We've been on it the whole time.
A long beat. The weight of it settling.
DESTINY
Does the state know?
GIL
They know about the water. The injection wells. That's what they're
investigating. The fill sand - that's harder. That's seventy years
of paperwork that doesn't exist anymore. But the Geiger readings
Elena's been getting in her basement... they're not from the
wells.
DESTINY
They're from what's underneath.
GIL
The wells cracked the slabs. The cracks let it up.
Destiny looks at the Geiger counter on the shelf. The one labeled ROSA.
DESTINY
Mom knew.
GIL
Mom suspected. She couldn't prove it. Nobody would test. Nobody would
look.
DESTINY
And you chose to look.
GIL
I couldn't help it. I've never been able to stop looking.
She takes his hand.
DESTINY
I know. It's why Mom left. Why I left. Why everyone eventually
leaves.
GIL
But you came back.
DESTINY
I came back because this is home. Because the clinic is here. Because
you're here.
GIL
I'm sorry I've been difficult.
DESTINY
You've been yourself. That's not the same as difficult.
GIL
It feels the same.
DESTINY
Maybe. But it's also what made you find the truth. So.
She looks at the wall.
DESTINY (CONT'D)
What happens now?
GIL
The state investigation continues. The federal review. Rayborn's
lawyers will negotiate. There'll be fines. Maybe settlements. The
wells will stay closed until someone certifies they're safe.
DESTINY
And the people on Oak Street?
GIL
They'll get alternative water. Health screenings. Maybe compensation,
eventually. It'll take years. It always takes years.
DESTINY
And you?
GIL
I'm still the mayor. Still forty-two votes - or forty-three,
depending on who you ask.
DESTINY
What are you going to do?
GIL
Keep asking questions. Keep documenting. Keep showing up.
DESTINY
That sounds exhausting.
GIL
It is.
DESTINY
Is it worth it?
Gil looks at his mother's photograph.
GIL
She died waiting for someone to tell the truth. She never got her
answer. She never got justice.
He looks at his daughter.
GIL (CONT'D)
But the people on Oak Street - they'll know what happened to them.
They'll have proof. They'll have something to fight with. That's
worth something.
DESTINY
That's worth everything.
GIL
Yeah. I think so too.
They sit together in silence.
Outside, the night is quiet. The storm has passed. The stars are visible.
56. THE STEPS
EXT. DESTINY'S APARTMENT BUILDING --- DAY
Late afternoon. Golden hour light - the same light that fell on the bank steps.
Destiny walks toward her building. Keys in hand. A normal day. The kind of day she's had a thousand times.
She reaches the concrete steps. Four of them. Worn. Ordinary.
She climbs the first step. The second.
She stops.
Her eyes go to the concrete beneath her feet. A hairline crack runs across the third step. The edge of the step is slightly lower than it should be. Settlement. A quarter inch, maybe less. The kind of thing you'd never notice unless you were looking.
The kind of thing her father would notice. The kind of thing she used to train herself not to see. Before tonight. Before the couch. Before the fill sand.
We stay on her face. Something shifts. Quiet. Not dramatic - just recognition.
A DOOR
OPENS somewhere inside. FOOTSTEPS. Normal life continuing around her.
She reaches for her keys.
Stops.
Pockets them.
She turns away from the entrance. Walks back down the steps. She can't go home. Not to this home. Not anymore.
HOLD
ON: THE STEPS.
The crack. The settlement. The thing that was always there.
Destiny is gone. We don't see where.
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57. DESTINY LEAVES
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- MORNING
Destiny stands near the door. A bag at her feet. The couch where she slept is made - hospital corners, like she was never there.
Gil stands by the wall. Not looking at her. Looking at the pattern.
DESTINY
I called last night. While you were working.
GIL
Called who?
DESTINY
Sarah. From residency. She's chief of pediatrics now. In Denver.
GIL
Denver.
DESTINY
There's an opening. She said she'd hold it for me.
Gil still doesn't turn.
GIL (CONT'D)
Because of me.
DESTINY
Because of the water. Because of what's under the houses. Because of what's under my house - the building I was going to make a life in.
Beat.
DESTINY (CONT'D)
Because you were right.
She picks up her bag.
DESTINY (CONT'D)
I believe you, Dad. That's why I'm leaving.
She moves toward the door. Stops. Reaches into her pocket.
She pulls out a single key. Her apartment key. Sets it on the table.
DESTINY
I can't go back there. The steps. The cracks. I see them everywhere now.
Beat.
DESTINY (CONT'D)
That's your inheritance to me.
GIL
Destiny -
DESTINY
Come visit. When you can.
She looks at him one last time.
DESTINY (CONT'D)
If you can.
She leaves.
Gil stands alone. The key on the table. The wall behind him.
He doesn't move for a long time.
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58. THE FOURTH WALL
TITLE CARD: THREE WEEKS LATER
INT. GIL'S TRAILER --- NIGHT
The couch is empty. Not "someone just got up" empty. Uninhabited. No blanket. No pillow.
One key on the table. Destiny's apartment key. Untouched. A relic.
Gil at the wall.
The completed equation is there now. At the center.
1638 ÷ 43 = 38 r 4
He's added nothing around it. Just the math.
He pulls the election certification from a folder. Sandra's 42 crossed out. 43 written above it.
His thumb rubs the crossed-out number. As if trying to erase it.
The paper fibers catch. It won't come clean.
One vote.
He looks at his mother's photograph.
The invoices. The permits. The water tests. The falsified data.
The photograph dated 2038. Still unexplained. Still pinned there.
The \$16,379 invoice. Off by one. Never understood.
He just looks.
Then - slowly - his gaze shifts.
Toward us.
Not fully. A glance.
His eyes find the camera.
GIL
Forty-three.
A pause. The floor seems to shift.
GIL (CONT'D)
Or forty-two. Depending on who you ask.
Longer pause.
GIL (CONT'D)
(quieter still)
Did you see it?
The camera holds.
He turns back to the wall.
Five seconds. Ten.
The equation. The photograph of Rosa. The map.
The camera doesn't stay on the wall.
It drifts down - past Gil's boots - past the worn linoleum -
through a seam in the floor and into the dark crawlspace beneath the trailer.
Raw sand. Foundation fill. Ordinary grit.
A slow click begins. The Geiger counter. One beat. Then another.
Above us, the wind presses along the baseline of the mountains like breath.
Then -
CUT TO BLACK.
Silence.
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Below it, in small type: What's under your steps?
END OF RECALL
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